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Mortenlor
MortenlorLv54yr
2020-08-29 06:56

delete this post. xp posts. delete this post. xp posts. delete this post. xp posts. delete this post. xp posts. delete this post. xp posts.

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crazy_immortal
crazy_immortalAuthor

i dont know why you did it, but i am not gonna erase it, even though i am pretty tempted right now

Random_Asian
Random_AsianLv3

Just delete it lol, I actually like this bcuz ppl usually give 5 stars and that's basically free 5 stars with no meaning to it. But I aint complaining if I get one tho lmao

crazy_immortal:i dont know why you did it, but i am not gonna erase it, even though i am pretty tempted right now
crazy_immortal
crazy_immortalAuthor

well that might be his real opinion, just erasing them to feel better, doesn't gain me anything

Random_Asian:Just delete it lol, I actually like this bcuz ppl usually give 5 stars and that's basically free 5 stars with no meaning to it. But I aint complaining if I get one tho lmao
Random_Asian
Random_AsianLv3

Not to feel better, he legit asked to delete his review lol

crazy_immortal:well that might be his real opinion, just erasing them to feel better, doesn't gain me anything
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Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

skipped to the latest but he is still hiding, playing lowkey is cliche, I've seen it millions of times and is boring if it keeps going like that. the more the mc hides the more enemy would come so why hide, so stupid, I've seen so much I will play low-key and then the new enemy comes and he fights him and then he's like im going low-key again, seen **** like that 100 times over and over and over and over and is boring as ****, especially when the mc is on earth and is strong but still acts like he's in danger so he has to act normal, just act like urself. Him acting in the shadow is cliche and why do that when he can solve the problem with his own hands, and what's the point of reading if his like batman and other mc which everyone has read, it makes sense if he acted lowkey, in the beginning, to take his family over but continuing acting low key is boring, and he doesn't act like a dragon at all cuz I never heard a dragon that hides, he has 0 dragon pride and that's what I've seen so far from reading, if u wanted to do the cliche low key then go with a normal human, not a dragon. I mean, what would the readers think when they read the title, a dragon that hides from mortal, a fucking mortal, a mortal that is an ant compared to a dragon, makes no fucking sense, I don't think his a dragon or even an immortal being at all. If he was a human it would have made sense but this doesn't make sense at all, feels like the title is clickbait, why continue to read if the author says mc would forever be a stupid dragon that hides and acts like a batman.

House
HouseLv15

I have been putting off writing a review for this novel because I was hoping it would get better.... Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐ Character Design⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ '(this is 2.6 ⭐so i tried to get it up to 3⭐ but i could not do it)' (sorry author but i tried) First of all the biggest problem in this novel is the MC. He is so so so so so frustrating to read about. He should be a proud royal dragon right? WRONG! What we get is and MC who keeps on hiding his power. (Ruler in the shadows my ass he doesn't even kill someone for 100+ chapters) So if you are her for a fun fantasy trip (turn around). MC is also super slow in cultivation like for real he is still at the first layer of the first cultivation realm! 100 chapters and he is at layer 1. I'm not kidding it takes him 100 chapters to start cultivation. He fights a few mortals that's about it... Also everyone and there nan is trying to kill MC. Yet all he does is hide and hide and hide and die (that's right he fakes his own dead to hide from mortals even tho he is a cultivator) A cultivator who can't kill a single mortal and keeps hiding from them. IT TAKES HIM 100 CHAPTERS TO TAKE CARE OF A MORTAL WHORE!!!! ^ that's right you did not read this wrong. IT takes MC 100+ chapters to take care of a random WHORE! A MORTAL WHORE WITH NO BACKING/ NOT FROM A BIG CLAN/ NOT SMART/SHE HAS NOTING SPECIAL ABOUT HER/ A NORMAL FUCKING SKANK And it takes MC 100+ chapters to do noting that's right he is still hiding form her. This is also a first for me in all the novels I have read I have never seen a CULTIVATOR that's hiding from a everyday MORTAL. In the last couple of chapters it seems like author is trying to turn MC around but I would not get my hopes up. The whore was alone no1 around, no protection, no reason to not kill her. And MC left..... She also Killed his dad, Tried poisoning him, Drugged his lovers, Tried selling his MAIN WIFE to a PERV, Tried selling his second wife to a perv, Tried selling his third wife to a perv, Tried selling his slave to a perv, Tried sending/drugging his MAIN WIFE to a PERV, Tried sending/drugging his second wife to a perv, Tried killing him on more the one occasion, Tried selling his lovers to another guy, Tried .... And MC lets this random WHORE run around for 100 of chapters...... When all it would have taken was to just kill her and be over with it. This novel is so frustrating i don't even know if i can recommend it to anyone who is looking for a fun novel to read. I'm also not sure I will continue reading this when I'll need to pay but ill probably keep reading it but think long and hard b4 you guys start reading this FRUSTRATING NOVEL! Ooo yea i almost forgot MC is also and emotional wreck for the first 90+ chapters. So all in all its meh.

Credo_A
Credo_ALv3

My disappoinment is immesurable in this one. the idea and world building is good and has a pontential but he ruined it by he's twisted fetishes. Mc development is none existent, instead it's a character regression, Author at start will make you believe that he's character is decent and have bottomline but you will get disappointed because author will slowly trasform him like those trash young master who will resort for blackmailing, forcing innocent women without those he can't get a love one despite having advantages like bs dragon pheromone or bloodline. And don't focus on getting stronger by cultivating instead focus on scheming to look like the mc smart but clearly fail it horribly because he's scheme is how to make all the woman he's slave and use them but instead get in trouble because how beutiful they are and need his saving. how idiotic his decision by giving his woman an world experience (example:he literally bring qin slave 'no cultivation just starting' and gaoling 'low cultivation' to an inheritance cave full of strong cultivator and expect them to protect them because of their background really? How idiotic that is. By the way mc cultivation is 1st qi condensation bring an weak woman to dangerous place considered a smart scheme of mc, I can only say Bruh..). Writing quality is horrible at start where there is to much repetition of words, sentence and plotline. The good thing around 300 chapter is it lessen the repetition of words, sentence and phrase but it still there. For plots no changes it's still the same. Overall this is a story of a royal dragon that hide to a mortal focus in scheming in how to force and blackmail woman to became his sex-slave, instead of focusing in cultivating and dominate his enemy through power or strength like a true dragon should act because of how prideful and arrogant they are they despite schemer because for them schemer is for the weak, like a human excel at, not a dragon dominate through power( for me he does'nt ressemble any dragon at all, he should be a human or a snake it much more believable). And the title does'nt make sense royal dragon and phoenix? he's empress phoenix has no screen time at all she only show for snu snu, moral support and managing the background the other slave have more screen time and development than her who supposed to be the main heroined. Any way, there is still hope for this if author really want to continue on scheming atleast stop the blackmailing and the woman slave it's very predictable because i can predict his revenge he will surely make his brother wife a slave and fvxk her in front of him the same with his father nothing change like what his doing throught the novel.

Gridmark
GridmarkLv5
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