Story is pretty good and fresh Unique start with Mc an Fmc with incest I like it’s nice but I feel like the story progresses a bit too slowly besides the h-scenes n training a lil slow plot I don’t mind that but this guy acts like a rat so much for being a dragon dude won’t take no risks an I bet if his cultivation was high he still wouldn’t expose himself scared to die when they on a world with low cultivation which makes me not like parts of this novel makes him stand out as a *****
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LIKEwell i want to make him more like a guy on the shadows, i mean he got cripled and killed once for being in the light, so this time he is gonna play in the shadows. as for the progress of the story i am trying to build a solid foundation and solid characters around him, its not like he wont take his risks its just that at this time he doenst deem them worthy for him to do so, i mean its just some lowly humans with no cultivation for him, as for the ***** part i dont know i like my Mc being more of a smart guy than a muscle brain
Dude he’s a dragon.