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Shinn154
Shinn154Lv124yr
2021-02-10 17:06

Don't waste your time reading this. The beginning was really interesting. until MC meets a second girl, and fell for her. She treating him like a toy and using him none stop for her goal. and then the author started forcing romance with this girl!! like, come on!! and forcing some idiotic reasons to break up with his first girl who did really like him. and now he has more girls who using him and hates each other. Take my advice, don't read.

Galaxy Wars: The Legacy of Light and Darkness

ranmaro
4.4
219 Chs

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Shinn154
Shinn154Lv12

Space drama with idiotic MC. not for me. Author if you reading this, I really did like the beginning of the story until you force them together.

4yr
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ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

Sorry for your inconvenience, yet the story has harem and R-18, so at some point the story should show these two aspects. Plus there is a reason behind all these transformations, it's related to the character development and their reaction to the change in risks and situations. People act differently in times of stress and danger than at times of peace and prosperity. For me, the story feels wrong if after the end of a threat and a phase of surviving then entering a new stage of prosperity and peace, the characters didn't change their minds, attitudes, and stands. If you give it more thought, you will see a point here :) Yet that doesn't take anything from your taste, as after all you read what you like and enjoy :) I'm glad you enjoyed it so far and sad to see you leave, but I understand :)

4yr
Shinn154
Shinn154Lv12

some will say people can change and some don't. how come you can love someone who will trick, betrayed, or try to kill you for her own goal? don't tell me he did not notice her behavior. but still like her in downfall way. he did many stupid things, but you can't just invite some strange woman in your life then get a play by her every time. 3 girls with a problematic history. only invite disaster for himself later. I just can't continue. cuz even his butler (android) middle in his business and helping girls.

ranmaro:Sorry for your inconvenience, yet the story has harem and R-18, so at some point the story should show these two aspects. Plus there is a reason behind all these transformations, it's related to the character development and their reaction to the change in risks and situations. People act differently in times of stress and danger than at times of peace and prosperity. For me, the story feels wrong if after the end of a threat and a phase of surviving then entering a new stage of prosperity and peace, the characters didn't change their minds, attitudes, and stands. If you give it more thought, you will see a point here :) Yet that doesn't take anything from your taste, as after all you read what you like and enjoy :) I'm glad you enjoyed it so far and sad to see you leave, but I understand :)
4yr
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ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

Good point indeed yet if there is no problematic background for the side character, the story won’t be much interesting It’s my thoughts so don’t mind them Anyway you are welcomed anytime Have a nice day

Shinn154:some will say people can change and some don't. how come you can love someone who will trick, betrayed, or try to kill you for her own goal? don't tell me he did not notice her behavior. but still like her in downfall way. he did many stupid things, but you can't just invite some strange woman in your life then get a play by her every time. 3 girls with a problematic history. only invite disaster for himself later. I just can't continue. cuz even his butler (android) middle in his business and helping girls.
4yr
1
Shinn154
Shinn154Lv12

same to you. good luck with the story.

ranmaro:Good point indeed yet if there is no problematic background for the side character, the story won’t be much interesting It’s my thoughts so don’t mind them Anyway you are welcomed anytime Have a nice day
4yr
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ranmaro
ranmaroAuthor

Welcome to my novel If you like spaces travel, star wars, guardian of the galaxy, and star trek cool works, then you will defintely like this one here. I will write one chapter daily minimum, but if you supported it with stones and voting, then it’s fair to reward you with more chapters like i did today. Have a nice journey and sit tightly as we will move with speed of light between chapters, lol

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NaphtaIi
NaphtaIiLv3

Really looking forward to reading this novel from what I know the MC is James and this is about Star Wars. I can't wait to see what adventure awaits this MC, a big plus is the quick updates. Even I can't put out that much content, hopefully it's really enjoyable.

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NotUse
NotUseLv4

This novel is gives me Star Wars vibes. I remember watching those kinds of films when I was a kid. Anyways, back to the review. As for the writing quality I am truly impressed. The introduction immediately grabbed my attention especially in the first few paragraphs about man's wish to fly. The following chapters,gives more interest, making me want to reader further. As fort the world background, the author was able to describe each scenario and place perfectly. They're not very wordy and boring unlike other sci-fi novels wherein the author explains too much about the scenes making things a bit boring. (This might be different from the perspective of others) Stability of Updates, this category is always an immediate five stars for me. Your works are impressive and I wish you good luck! -R,S

4yr
Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14

Don’t bother with this crap. Total waste of my time.

4yr
BookDevourer87
BookDevourer87Lv15

First of, I only read until chapter 50 before I dropped this novel. I don't know if it got better in the later chapters, but since the bad grammar/use of wrong words, the lacking writing style and the storytelling (which is partly just utterly nonsense) was rather hard to accept, I had to drop it. I was hoping for some star wars like story with jedis and sith, but the novel was just too lacking in quality... Sorry Mr. Author! Try and get yourself an editor. If the chapters get edited into some proper english, it would instantly the quality of your novel by at least 1 star.

4yr
SinisterSmile
SinisterSmileLv4

The novel is pleasant and, as the author is dedicated to updating 5 chapters a day, there is no reason not to support it. Let's see what our MC James will bring us as surprise.

4yr
Joel_West
Joel_WestLv12

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Skkyyy
SkkyyyLv5

:In a mood for a new read and I'm gonna try this one! Be with me mates and lets read this and journey together on this wonderful novel that the author has given us once again!!!

4yr
Bpaat39
Bpaat39Lv15

I was quite enjoying the whole novel right up until chapter 80 ish. The end to beginning of the next few chapters either repeated each other or just plain skipped to a different part of the story. Also the titles don't really make sense. Some of the chapters you basically pay for two pages worth of content you already paid for. ***Spoiler ahead*** For anyone reading up till now im specifically talking about when in the story Charles tries to turn eli against james after setting off a bomb on the ship. Its just a really hard part to get over and it should be fixed and re-released. It barely makes sense. Thanks for reading.

4yr
BetaRaccoon
BetaRaccoonLv14

I will give this 5 stars just because, but is it just me or is the cover picture just not a pic of anakin from star wars (hayden christiansen), but just With another face?

4yr
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