Item: Galaxy Wars: The Legacy of Light and Darkness
Rating: 3
Author: BookDevourer87

BookDevourer87Lv154yr

2020-08-23 01:52

First of, I only read until chapter 50 before I dropped this novel. I don't know if it got better in the later chapters, but since the bad grammar/use of wrong words, the lacking writing style and the storytelling (which is partly just utterly nonsense) was rather hard to accept, I had to drop it. I was hoping for some star wars like story with jedis and sith, but the novel was just too lacking in quality... Sorry Mr. Author! Try and get yourself an editor. If the chapters get edited into some proper english, it would instantly the quality of your novel by at least 1 star.

Galaxy Wars: The Legacy of Light and Darkness

ranmaro

4.4

219 Chs

Liked by 12 people

Replies2

TheDangerousDinoLv4

It would definitely be better with an editor

4yr

Shinn154Lv12

the story got worse. so worse I had to post review.

3yr

Other Reviews

ranmaroAuthor

Welcome to my novel If you like spaces travel, star wars, guardian of the galaxy, and star trek cool works, then you will defintely like this one here. I will write one chapter daily minimum, but if you supported it with stones and voting, then it’s fair to reward you with more chapters like i did today. Have a nice journey and sit tightly as we will move with speed of light between chapters, lol

4yr

NaphtaIiLv3

Really looking forward to reading this novel from what I know the MC is James and this is about Star Wars. I can't wait to see what adventure awaits this MC, a big plus is the quick updates. Even I can't put out that much content, hopefully it's really enjoyable.

4yr

NotUseLv4

This novel is gives me Star Wars vibes. I remember watching those kinds of films when I was a kid. Anyways, back to the review. As for the writing quality I am truly impressed. The introduction immediately grabbed my attention especially in the first few paragraphs about man's wish to fly. The following chapters,gives more interest, making me want to reader further. As fort the world background, the author was able to describe each scenario and place perfectly. They're not very wordy and boring unlike other sci-fi novels wherein the author explains too much about the scenes making things a bit boring. (This might be different from the perspective of others) Stability of Updates, this category is always an immediate five stars for me. Your works are impressive and I wish you good luck! -R,S

4yr

Everything_ForeverLv14

Don’t bother with this crap. Total waste of my time.

4yr

SinisterSmileLv4

The novel is pleasant and, as the author is dedicated to updating 5 chapters a day, there is no reason not to support it. Let's see what our MC James will bring us as surprise.

4yr

Joel_WestLv12

Reveal spoiler

4yr

SkkyyyLv5

:In a mood for a new read and I'm gonna try this one! Be with me mates and lets read this and journey together on this wonderful novel that the author has given us once again!!!

4yr

Shinn154Lv12

Reveal spoiler

3yr

Bpaat39Lv15

I was quite enjoying the whole novel right up until chapter 80 ish. The end to beginning of the next few chapters either repeated each other or just plain skipped to a different part of the story. Also the titles don't really make sense. Some of the chapters you basically pay for two pages worth of content you already paid for. ***Spoiler ahead*** For anyone reading up till now im specifically talking about when in the story Charles tries to turn eli against james after setting off a bomb on the ship. Its just a really hard part to get over and it should be fixed and re-released. It barely makes sense. Thanks for reading.

3yr

BetaRaccoonLv14

I will give this 5 stars just because, but is it just me or is the cover picture just not a pic of anakin from star wars (hayden christiansen), but just With another face?

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