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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor4yr
2020-10-02 06:33

Ahem I decided to become a shameless author too. Anyway you have to know before you start reading that well it's my first bookmaking so know that my plot is maybe bad or even nonexistent even.. (for now) 'cause I'm really bad at setting a plot... My OC will be an entirely different Saiyan made up by me, and will clearly not respect DBZ logic and laws (it's a fanfic so...). Also the pace is terribly long too, so if you want to read a quick one, well it's not here...yeah... Anyway, if you have anything to say about the book and all that, just comment or do a review, good or bad I don't really care much about it... 🖖✌

One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.

VastoHeaven
4.3
163 Chs

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writelife
writelifeLv2

when will update again?

4yr
richy_ket
richy_ketLv3

Yes ok

4yr
richy_ket
richy_ketLv3

Yes ok

4yr
Daoist_Rahul
Daoist_RahulLv3

was he splat on and he did nothing?

4yr
SufferJustLikeMe
SufferJustLikeMeLv4

Who's the love interest author? 🥺

4yr
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Under_99
Under_99Lv14

Dear shameless author I have decided to read ur Work and came to the realization that i have yet to see the queen of one Piece also known as boa hancock and i have already reached chp 31 and am losing my Patients fast All i what to know is what chapter well she be showen

4yr
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Under_99
Under_99Lv14

If its not boa

SufferJustLikeMe:Who's the love interest author? 🥺
4yr
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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

Okay, I will reply a month later but meh, its Hancock

SufferJustLikeMe:Who's the love interest author? 🥺
4yr
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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

in the last version yes, but I've changed it

Daoist_Rahul:was he splat on and he did nothing?
4yr
VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

Ahem, I will reply a month later but meh, its Hancock

Under_99:Dear shameless author I have decided to read ur Work and came to the realization that i have yet to see the queen of one Piece also known as boa hancock and i have already reached chp 31 and am losing my Patients fast All i what to know is what chapter well she be showen
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4yr
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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

It's Hancock

Under_99:If its not boa
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4yr
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Under_99
Under_99Lv14

np bro

VastoHeaven:Ahem, I will reply a month later but meh, its Hancock
4yr
Goatless_Pillow
Goatless_PillowLv2

noice

4yr
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HellGod13
HellGod13Lv13

is the mc saiyan?

4yr
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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

Yes, but maybe not what youre searching for though...😅

HellGod13:is the mc saiyan?
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4yr
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HellGod13
HellGod13Lv13

it's okay ill read it[img=recommend]. I'm at 30something[img=recommend][img=recommend]

VastoHeaven:Yes, but maybe not what youre searching for though...😅
4yr
1theOverlord
1theOverlordLv2

When will you update author

VastoHeaven:Yes, but maybe not what youre searching for though...😅
4yr
Covert_Shirohige
Covert_ShirohigeLv14

Does he get a devil fruit He hasnt eaten one yet

4yr
ALLMightyBunny
ALLMightyBunnyLv3

Author I didn't read it yet but did the MC and Boa Hancock have met yet?

3yr
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ALLMightyBunny
ALLMightyBunnyLv3

Is the MC will become a marine or pirate? if its marine its cool because its rare to have a marine MC if its pirate it cool too[img=recommend] I just want to know[img=recommend]

3yr
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