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Kojikazz22
Kojikazz22Lv134yr
2020-07-10 18:50

I don't know why I started reading this but It's as bad as shiet and as a bad case of boredom I continued reading shiet I'm starring to hate this fanfic It's not reincarnated one so why bother reading It's too much like Saiyan but it's too badly done There are too much I hate about this fanfic

One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.

VastoHeaven
4.3
163 Chs

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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

Aouch, that hurt... it's maybe the first really bad review I get lol. But thanks for reading though...😶

4yr
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KAABS
KAABSLv5

"It's not reincarnated one so why bother reading" Really? I mean... Woah.

4yr
24
OtakuReverence
OtakuReverenceLv14

So you only read reincarnation novel pathetic

4yr
30
dukkeh
dukkehLv4

hmm I think that a fanfic that's not a "reincarnation" one possibly means a good story written within the world of X show with a lot of oc characters but whatever the guy thinks it's trash without mc being isekaied into x show

OtakuReverence:So you only read reincarnation novel pathetic
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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenAuthor

Ahem I decided to become a shameless author too. Anyway you have to know before you start reading that well it's my first bookmaking so know that my plot is maybe bad or even nonexistent even.. (for now) 'cause I'm really bad at setting a plot... My OC will be an entirely different Saiyan made up by me, and will clearly not respect DBZ logic and laws (it's a fanfic so...). Also the pace is terribly long too, so if you want to read a quick one, well it's not here...yeah... Anyway, if you have anything to say about the book and all that, just comment or do a review, good or bad I don't really care much about it... 🖖✌

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jhsilver
jhsilverLv12

I don't know what to tell you it's not bad it was just Boring. There were moments that I enjoyed but you spend too much time during his childhood and took 68 chapters to finally do a time skip but by then I had lost too much interest to continue. I might pick this back up when there is more chapter It might get better like I said not bad just boring. Question do you plan to have your MC travel to different worlds or to some upper realm?

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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

Writing Quality - 2 Stars Story Development - 1 Star Character Design - 1 Star Updating Stability - 3 Star World Background - 2 Star Edit : The thing I hate the most about this Fanfic is the fact that you make him an emotional/ innocent Saiyan that goes around The " holyland ", the most cursed place in the World of One Piece, expecting him to get angry at the WG or the CD because of how they treat them as Humans, fishmen, etc (basically all living things) " slaves " but well....we get this ! Honestly, the Mc is pathetic in his own right . He only mentioned it at the beginning but basically I hoped for more, I mean ....he isn't a Saiyan for nothing . they act with their emotions and don't care If their opponent is stronger then them . If they want to do something then are able to .( DragonBall law!) also, I Think you Made Saiyans way weaker then they orginaly are !

4yr
Plaxa
PlaxaLv5

41 chapters and nothing.....literally nothing...ufff.... waste of time....:( 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4

(rag) (the most pathetic main character I have seen) (according to him, he does not mind being spat on) the author showed how pathetic he is in the first 3 chapters.

4yr
PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3

DUDE DONT DROP IT,ITS REALLY A GOOD ONE AND HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE (7CHPS/WEEK JUST A SUGGESTION) NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Roronoa_Borsalino
Roronoa_BorsalinoLv14

(👍≧∇≦)👍 ...

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ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv5

Story line is oKay. chapter 60-85 are basically nonsense filler Garbage. story development is like snail slow and there is like zero excitement at all. nothing brilliant, comically funny or Wowing about. kinda dull. lots of potential but seem author does not know how to Polish the story.

4yr
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