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HolyJoker
HolyJokerLv54yr
2020-07-03 02:48

Would like the MC to be a little crueler and more emotionless and dominating, like an Alpha. But this is just my thoughts don't take them go mind and actually write the story you have in mind. Don't change your story plan for anyone, if you have a vision of where the story will go that you like go after that.😁✌

The Master (A MHA Fanfic){DROPPED}

Klazy_Labbit
4.7
20 Chs

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HolyJoker
HolyJokerLv5

Wow... that is some bad grammar in the review above...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

4yr
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitAuthor

I will make him crueler and more dominating and as for the emotionless part, I will keep his smugness and arrogance a bit. I want him to be like Shiro but nowhere near af. I could make him emotionless but then he should have stayed in China where he would fit in with those xianxia/wuxia mcs.

4yr
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitAuthor

I usuailly don't bother with grammar in comments and reviews. I may be a Nazi (aka Hydra agent) but I am not a Grammar Nazi (aka Capn America)

HolyJoker:Wow... that is some bad grammar in the review above...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
4yr
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HolyJoker
HolyJokerLv5

Do your thing dude. Don't listen to me, there is no need. Just follow your own instinct and write something you would like to read...at least that is how I do it.🤣✌

Klazy_Labbit:I will make him crueler and more dominating and as for the emotionless part, I will keep his smugness and arrogance a bit. I want him to be like Shiro but nowhere near af. I could make him emotionless but then he should have stayed in China where he would fit in with those xianxia/wuxia mcs.
4yr
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitAuthor

Giving myself five stars because I can. So this is my first piece of fiction and I am doing this for fun. I tried finding any evil oc centered MHA fic but couldn't find any and most of the oc fics that I did find was not good so I wrote one myself. Also English is not my spoken language so you can expect some errors which I will try my best not to make. I appreciate constructive criticism not just things that say its **** because I will sleep wondering why. Thanks for reading this and leave some reviews and stones to motivate me to write more as even a single stone or review will make me happy.

4yr

PinguGod_
PinguGod_Lv5

Due to webnovel being a bish the previous fic was incapable of getting powerstones. The author deleted the fic on which I made a review so I am here making it again. The fic is great and has a lot of potential. The mc has unique ideas, and a nice ability/quirk.The grammar is decent. I recommend the story.

4yr
Rotting_Corpse
Rotting_CorpseLv3

Well it seems I have to do this again.... A MHA fic with an evil MC is not something you see everyday and I have not come across many if any at all. So this is refreshing to read and I like the mc . I really like it and hope you don't drop this.

4yr
Ms_Magician
Ms_MagicianLv5

Didn't review it last time but here you go. I think that this has a lot of potential and can be done well. So far I like the Mc and am craving for more. I was writing an evil fic as well but my parents confiscated my pc and I don't get enough time to write on a phone. But still I will read this whenever I get the time. Pls Update more.

4yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

I love the concept...an SI in BNHA before cannon with mind powers and is neutral.....yes...evil is there, but as long as he isnt some raping cunt, or child experimenter I am in...I really like the 1 st and half of 2 nd chp...just continue.....just, dont make MC an idiot,,,,keep him smart and OP, use his SI BNHA world and other anime world knowledge for his advantage....make him OP, and caalculative,,,,if u add romance, build it and keep it happy and **** to balance out the dark ****....just dont make the MC a man whore or the lovers, mom, wives or sluts,,make em loyal and helpful,,anyway GL

4yr
Chris55
Chris55Lv13

finally i found an MHA fanfic with evil MC, it was very difficult to find fanfic like this, i mean i've found an MHA fanfic with evil MC but it was just izuku that became evil and it was very boring in my opinion. i will support you so don't drop this fanfic. And please update more.

4yr
PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3

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QTi
QTiLv3

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slyninja04
slyninja04Lv4

I would like to see some romance but since you are the author I have no say in it I like the concept of this but can you let him not to close to the dark side just enough to love someone

4yr
Kittens_are_cuter
Kittens_are_cuterLv4

I love this story a lot and am thrilled waiting for more. Evil Mc in Mha is not something I ever came across but was searching for one from a long time. The grammar is decent and you have my full support. Please don't drop

4yr
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