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Kittens_are_cuter
Kittens_are_cuterLv44yr
2020-05-31 00:28

I love this story a lot and am thrilled waiting for more. Evil Mc in Mha is not something I ever came across but was searching for one from a long time. The grammar is decent and you have my full support. Please don't drop

The Master (A MHA Fanfic){DROPPED}

Klazy_Labbit
4.7
20 Chs

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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitAuthor

Thanks for your support.

4yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

ey man...if you give MC powers, like another one some suggestions..... -Ceasers GAS GAS DF power [lots of potential, plus suits MC] -Telekinesis or vector manipulation -Laws DF powers along with the barrier barrier fruits powers....essential MC can make barriers and rooms but, can also create personal dimensions]. -Solo leveling, but only the shadow powers.....meaning MC only has shadow manipulation powers and can also create minions. -Paper manipulation....like MC can have the paper logia DF powers from the one piece game, combined with konans abilities......its kinda weak but has potential, and is very useful in moments without fighting.......MC can create paper clones, animals, paper buildings etc. -Creation....MC can create any non organic thing he wants, no consequences or requirements like energy of fat cells BUT MC needs to hold his breath to create something, and if the object is bigger than a 2 story building, he will be paralyzed for half an hour... -Blood manipulation -Kekkai sensen the eye powers...[ u can add some new **** if u want, cause whilst its extremely useful for spying and ****, in combat its worthless] -Magneto powers -Kuma's PAW PAW DF fruit powers IF u do add a power, tell me what it'll be.............only reason I suggested a second power is cause MC's power restrictions kinda [kinda] neuter him a bit and it isnt every useful against time manipulation, super strength, super will, and other powers

Klazy_Labbit:Thanks for your support.
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitAuthor

I will keep them in mind thank you and I can't reveal the plot so you will have to wait and see I guess. Thanks for reading.

amaturewriter:ey man...if you give MC powers, like another one some suggestions..... -Ceasers GAS GAS DF power [lots of potential, plus suits MC] -Telekinesis or vector manipulation -Laws DF powers along with the barrier barrier fruits powers....essential MC can make barriers and rooms but, can also create personal dimensions]. -Solo leveling, but only the shadow powers.....meaning MC only has shadow manipulation powers and can also create minions. -Paper manipulation....like MC can have the paper logia DF powers from the one piece game, combined with konans abilities......its kinda weak but has potential, and is very useful in moments without fighting.......MC can create paper clones, animals, paper buildings etc. -Creation....MC can create any non organic thing he wants, no consequences or requirements like energy of fat cells BUT MC needs to hold his breath to create something, and if the object is bigger than a 2 story building, he will be paralyzed for half an hour... -Blood manipulation -Kekkai sensen the eye powers...[ u can add some new **** if u want, cause whilst its extremely useful for spying and ****, in combat its worthless] -Magneto powers -Kuma's PAW PAW DF fruit powers IF u do add a power, tell me what it'll be.............only reason I suggested a second power is cause MC's power restrictions kinda [kinda] neuter him a bit and it isnt every useful against time manipulation, super strength, super will, and other powers
4yr
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Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitAuthor

Giving myself five stars because I can. So this is my first piece of fiction and I am doing this for fun. I tried finding any evil oc centered MHA fic but couldn't find any and most of the oc fics that I did find was not good so I wrote one myself. Also English is not my spoken language so you can expect some errors which I will try my best not to make. I appreciate constructive criticism not just things that say its **** because I will sleep wondering why. Thanks for reading this and leave some reviews and stones to motivate me to write more as even a single stone or review will make me happy.

4yr

PinguGod_
PinguGod_Lv5

Due to webnovel being a bish the previous fic was incapable of getting powerstones. The author deleted the fic on which I made a review so I am here making it again. The fic is great and has a lot of potential. The mc has unique ideas, and a nice ability/quirk.The grammar is decent. I recommend the story.

4yr
Rotting_Corpse
Rotting_CorpseLv3

Well it seems I have to do this again.... A MHA fic with an evil MC is not something you see everyday and I have not come across many if any at all. So this is refreshing to read and I like the mc . I really like it and hope you don't drop this.

4yr
Ms_Magician
Ms_MagicianLv5

Didn't review it last time but here you go. I think that this has a lot of potential and can be done well. So far I like the Mc and am craving for more. I was writing an evil fic as well but my parents confiscated my pc and I don't get enough time to write on a phone. But still I will read this whenever I get the time. Pls Update more.

4yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

I love the concept...an SI in BNHA before cannon with mind powers and is neutral.....yes...evil is there, but as long as he isnt some raping cunt, or child experimenter I am in...I really like the 1 st and half of 2 nd chp...just continue.....just, dont make MC an idiot,,,,keep him smart and OP, use his SI BNHA world and other anime world knowledge for his advantage....make him OP, and caalculative,,,,if u add romance, build it and keep it happy and **** to balance out the dark ****....just dont make the MC a man whore or the lovers, mom, wives or sluts,,make em loyal and helpful,,anyway GL

4yr
Chris55
Chris55Lv13

finally i found an MHA fanfic with evil MC, it was very difficult to find fanfic like this, i mean i've found an MHA fanfic with evil MC but it was just izuku that became evil and it was very boring in my opinion. i will support you so don't drop this fanfic. And please update more.

4yr
PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3

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4yr
QTi
QTiLv3

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4yr
slyninja04
slyninja04Lv4

I would like to see some romance but since you are the author I have no say in it I like the concept of this but can you let him not to close to the dark side just enough to love someone

4yr
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