Item: Blessings ...... of my life..
Rating: 5
Author: minho_Shiny

minho_ShinyLv34yr

2020-06-28 22:37

That's an interesting story and the author did a very good job by giving an intro and explaining clearly....I liked how the story went in a flow. The author described everything well. However, I would like to tell that there are few misspellings, which can be corrected by proofreading. Except that, I liked the overall story and author did a very good job. Keep up the good work dear author.. I will definitely give 5/5 for your hardword and to encourage you.

Blessings ...... of my life..

Amourbooks

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AmourbooksAuthor

Thanks for your suggestion I'll proofread it to do the required correction...

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