Not gonna lie, seeing the score i had high expectations, but sadly i got disappointed. I don't want to be too hard on the author, i know that it's very difficult for him writing in another language, but this novel needs an honest review. Writing quality(2/5): overall the writing quality is barely passable, it's not so bad that it's unreadable, but it's like reading a middle schooler essay... Lots of grammatical errors (missing puntuaction; swapping pronouns) and strange syntax order. Stability(5/5): nothing to say here Story development(3/5): not really a unique plot, but overall ok Character design(2/5): the MC is described as cunning and scheming but in reality he is not that smart. He do really stupid things that attract unwanted attention on himself even if he keep saying that he don't want to be noticed (like when he random kills 700 people in the ammission test getting the attention of all the powerful families, or when he reveals his name when supposed to be dead, and many more...) World background(2/5): the background until now is non existent.
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You people out here criticizing, why don't you stop criticizing and see how hard it is to write these stories if you have a problem with others' stories write your own story.
If the author can't take a critique than he will not go far,,, I think that my review will help him get better while your fake reviews (yeah i have seen more than one from you, probably you are a friend of his) are only doing harm to him because not only he will think that he has nothing to improve but also you are distorting the score value that now is overrated.
I never said what you said wrong or anything but at least give him some credit it's his first story plus English is not his first language so him being able to do that mostly without Google translate is a great job And do you know how hard it is to write a story that longer than of what you write in your tests and if your going tell him where he's going don't wrong not rate and criticise give him pointers like this and this needs improvement. It's like a woman asking how she looks and you're like three for looks and four body how would she feel?
I never said what you said wrong or anything but at least give him some credit it's his first story plus English is not his first language so him being able to do that mostly without Google translate is a great job And do you know how hard it is to write a story that longer than of what you write in your tests and if your going tell him where he's going don't wrong not rate and criticise give him pointers like this and this needs improvement. It's like a woman asking how she looks and you're like three for looks and four body how would she feel?
Oh and that **** about if he can't take a little bit of criticism he can't improve is basically saying everyone should be bullied and improve. No it dampen theirs mood and makes stop wanting to write some people writing Ln for fun and when you criticise them it's makes them want to stop some people just here for fun and because they love writing, but if criticise them what would they think 🤔?Wouldn't they think that it's better not to continue writing because of the criticism cause they were only here for fun and their love for writing.
I ain't no friend of his or anybody else reading this book. I just have a lot of respect for writers and because when I had no one these books helped a lot and took my mind off of things so don't talk when you don't have facts to back up your statements .
What the hell are you talking about??? I have listed all the things i wish were done better in the novel in a very clear way, saying what could be improved, i also stated myself that i knew he was a non native speaker (even if in my opinion that can't be an excuse) and now you are telling me that i'm bullying him??? Are you stupid or what? I didn't bully anyone, i simply gave my honest opinion, and even if we are talking about an amatour's novel i don't have to give 5/5 rating only to commend his efforts...
Hold up!, nigga first of all I never said anything about you bullying anyone you dumbass I was using bullying as an example and everyone is entitled to their own opinion but don't ever think people are like other people that take criticism and improve not everyone had the same life experience and some people out their have been criticise their whole life and unable to endure being criticise.
