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EvilChaos
EvilChaosLv103yr
2021-04-12 08:58

Fuck, the female character in this novel pisses me off. πŸ’©πŸ€¬πŸ€¬πŸ€¬πŸ€¬πŸ€¬πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘Ž ...............................................................

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EvilChaos
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And a mere NPC can sneer and disparage PLAYERS? WTF??

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Kritiko
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🧐WARNING: This novel is not for people who loves a cold and brute mafia type mc. Our mc here is witty and cool. He can also be ruthless and calculative. πŸ”₯ Author's writing quality is refreshing and easy to follow. No grammatical errors here and there. The only concern is the use of punctuations. πŸ”₯Story development flowed nicely. So far, @ch.70, MC is still more focused on gaming. Personally, I would want to read more wherein the MC engages in mafia related stuffs in real life, we can understand that it's still too early for that and he needs to focus more on gaming to build up his foundation in game. πŸ”₯Regarding character design, well, I really love the MC's personality especially when he does things logically. He's a great MC that thinks practically rather than complicating things.(no fillers so far) Side characters are also well written. They are not overly emphasized but still, one can feel their importance and relevance to the story. πŸ”₯Updating stability? As long as the author does not drop this, I would rate it 5* because so far, I'm really enjoying the story. πŸ”₯The world background is separated in two ways in general. The world background in-game so far is ever changing because our MC is trying to boost his character's level and status for him to implement his future plans. So far, it's what you would expect from a story with a game genre. On the other hand, his real life world background is what interests me the most. Though not a lot has been given as we are still in the beginning chapters, it's something that we readers should look out for. πŸ€PS: idk why this novel is not at the top 100 yet. even repetitive, unreasonable logic, and grammatically incoherent novels are in top? this novel just lacks exposure. it deserves more. I've been searching for gold and I found gold indeed. Dear Mr. Author, stay safe and healthy. Also, more chapters please? 😁

Randomguy791
Randomguy791Lv5

writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site. stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero. character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see. world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.

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