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Vistarion
VistarionLv114yr
2021-03-17 21:51

It's ok, for naw its just a copy of all novels mmorpg -> going beck in time. For naw(40chp) its 100% plot armor. Mc cash -> his dad is reach. Mc power -> he knows future. Mc status-> he is given fame because he knows future and can gain first clears on achievements (fame converts to his status as a Viscount). Mc lv -> his men will lv him up, or the guards he hired thx to "viscount" status will. For naw there Is nothing that MC did that define him or his personality. There is a lot of status screens(lv, stats, skills) so if you buy a chapters there is a risk of buying a stats sheet. I don't think author should ask for $$$ before he even let us know MC. For naw(40chp) its just world building and its a copy of all other "mc goes beck and know it all". Im droping this nowel since im unwilling to spend $ without knowing what im paying for (1-40 is not worth $).

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Vistarion
VistarionLv11

I tried reading more, I did to 55 chapter. Its absolute trash. It's just sad MC builds corporation in game but author has 0 idea on the topic. So Author skips all business building and throws commends like "hire" "borrow 500k" "invest"to create illusion of smart mc but he never do it properly(author own IQ/knowledge is a problem). All author can do in this book is give MC op items, class, plot armor. But the problem is you can't create a good book without real content. So even if you write a lot of content on plot armor when it comes to real world building (business and real side characters) its just crumbling. There is no real characters other than MC. My advise for author is to focus on game elements stop trying to create content about business in game. After all you can't write about something you have 0 idea about. Try to focus on MC solo play you might be better at that.

Drago_idc
Drago_idcLv11

This book is good and many things start to make sense if you get too chapter 120 + but sadly not a lot of people have the attention span, but the mc was never suppose to be smart as he skipped school, etc. so where did you get the idea he is trying to look smart when most people who read can tell his not smart, but i dont recomend this novel gor people who hate bad or average begining as this story gets better pass chapter 100 as most things start getting better described and authors quality gets better.

Drago_idc
Drago_idcLv11

Also although he has power if you read till 100+ a lot of bad things happen which he struggles through spoiler: his father dies, mafia collapses. He also knows nothing about managing as he ran away from home in his previous life, also he doesn't know much about war online as he quited early on from being supressed, so he is weak willed, this changes as story progresses but its your decision if you want to read it I'm just recommending you read it to 150 if upu have the patience and see what you think.

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Krish5061
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Kritiko
KritikoLv10

🧐WARNING: This novel is not for people who loves a cold and brute mafia type mc. Our mc here is witty and cool. He can also be ruthless and calculative. 🔥 Author's writing quality is refreshing and easy to follow. No grammatical errors here and there. The only concern is the use of punctuations. 🔥Story development flowed nicely. So far, @ch.70, MC is still more focused on gaming. Personally, I would want to read more wherein the MC engages in mafia related stuffs in real life, we can understand that it's still too early for that and he needs to focus more on gaming to build up his foundation in game. 🔥Regarding character design, well, I really love the MC's personality especially when he does things logically. He's a great MC that thinks practically rather than complicating things.(no fillers so far) Side characters are also well written. They are not overly emphasized but still, one can feel their importance and relevance to the story. 🔥Updating stability? As long as the author does not drop this, I would rate it 5* because so far, I'm really enjoying the story. 🔥The world background is separated in two ways in general. The world background in-game so far is ever changing because our MC is trying to boost his character's level and status for him to implement his future plans. So far, it's what you would expect from a story with a game genre. On the other hand, his real life world background is what interests me the most. Though not a lot has been given as we are still in the beginning chapters, it's something that we readers should look out for. 🍀PS: idk why this novel is not at the top 100 yet. even repetitive, unreasonable logic, and grammatically incoherent novels are in top? this novel just lacks exposure. it deserves more. I've been searching for gold and I found gold indeed. Dear Mr. Author, stay safe and healthy. Also, more chapters please? 😁

Randomguy791
Randomguy791Lv5

writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site. stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero. character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see. world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.

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