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Krish5061
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Reveal spoiler

4yr

Snowstar
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Hello, Author here. As stated in the summary, it's the story of a guy who was sent back into the time before the game released. A few points that readers should be noted while reading. 1. MC is an average player in the past. He can't know every other event and thing that present in the game. And he isn't a genius gamer either. So, there's nothing wrong if behaves like a noob sometimes. 2. The story will not be focused simply on the game. The real world will be involved as well from time to time. 3. MC ends with only one girl. There might be two to three love interests but that's it. Not every girl who meet MC will fall in love with MC 4. The starting 26 chapters are rushed without many explanations. We can't do anything that already happened. I haven't explained about the game or his background properly. I will take it slow and explain the terms on the way. 5. MC is indeed a Villain and has an arrogant nature and very selfish. But, he is also someone with a good heart. 6. The update stability is normally 7-10 ch/week. Depends on popularity. 7. I'm not sure if I explained all the important points. If there are any other doubts, leave a comment below.

4yr
InHisName
InHisNameLv6

At first I thought this novel was going to be a cliche-breaker. For the first time ever I had though we - the audience - will be reading a story from the perspective of a character who is usually the mini-antagonist (2nd generation wealthy heir template) but as the story progresses the MC slowly but surely reveals himself as typical Korean hero template 101. Why even bother to integrate the mafia aspect when it plays absolutely no role at all. The synopsis hinted at greatness; the story failed to deliver.

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Kritiko
KritikoLv10

🧐WARNING: This novel is not for people who loves a cold and brute mafia type mc. Our mc here is witty and cool. He can also be ruthless and calculative. 🔥 Author's writing quality is refreshing and easy to follow. No grammatical errors here and there. The only concern is the use of punctuations. 🔥Story development flowed nicely. So far, @ch.70, MC is still more focused on gaming. Personally, I would want to read more wherein the MC engages in mafia related stuffs in real life, we can understand that it's still too early for that and he needs to focus more on gaming to build up his foundation in game. 🔥Regarding character design, well, I really love the MC's personality especially when he does things logically. He's a great MC that thinks practically rather than complicating things.(no fillers so far) Side characters are also well written. They are not overly emphasized but still, one can feel their importance and relevance to the story. 🔥Updating stability? As long as the author does not drop this, I would rate it 5* because so far, I'm really enjoying the story. 🔥The world background is separated in two ways in general. The world background in-game so far is ever changing because our MC is trying to boost his character's level and status for him to implement his future plans. So far, it's what you would expect from a story with a game genre. On the other hand, his real life world background is what interests me the most. Though not a lot has been given as we are still in the beginning chapters, it's something that we readers should look out for. 🍀PS: idk why this novel is not at the top 100 yet. even repetitive, unreasonable logic, and grammatically incoherent novels are in top? this novel just lacks exposure. it deserves more. I've been searching for gold and I found gold indeed. Dear Mr. Author, stay safe and healthy. Also, more chapters please? 😁

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crash_hitter
crash_hitterLv11

In starting chapters, some players reach lvl 50in 1.5days (3 days in-game) is looking a bit extreme to imagine what would levels be after 3yr in MC life. will they reach lvl5000 or in 3yrs. I think author never played any RPG genre games although it is fantasy it is better to use low levels for narration of story. like reaching lvl 10 after 3 days in-game.

4yr
Wes_Harris
Wes_HarrisLv10

This book starts off well and continues to get better as you continue reading! Cant wait for the next chapter.............................................

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Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Good Book Idea but Author is Trash........................................ ............... .ynsynsnygsgn68gnvs7ctssrcj6s6fcjs for ft7s7f ..............

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Randomguy791
Randomguy791Lv5

writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site. stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero. character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see. world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.

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EvilChaos
EvilChaosLv10

Fuck, the female character in this novel pisses me off. 💩🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😠😠😠👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 ...............................................................

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Vistarion
VistarionLv11

It's ok, for naw its just a copy of all novels mmorpg -> going beck in time. For naw(40chp) its 100% plot armor. Mc cash -> his dad is reach. Mc power -> he knows future. Mc status-> he is given fame because he knows future and can gain first clears on achievements (fame converts to his status as a Viscount). Mc lv -> his men will lv him up, or the guards he hired thx to "viscount" status will. For naw there Is nothing that MC did that define him or his personality. There is a lot of status screens(lv, stats, skills) so if you buy a chapters there is a risk of buying a stats sheet. I don't think author should ask for $$$ before he even let us know MC. For naw(40chp) its just world building and its a copy of all other "mc goes beck and know it all". Im droping this nowel since im unwilling to spend $ without knowing what im paying for (1-40 is not worth $).

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