Shameless review by the author here. I initially started writing this book out of boredom when the pandemic first started, since I had so much free time. In that time, I wrote without planning anything out, just making it up as I went along, and as a result, the first 20 or so chapters can come off as kinda amateurish. However, I'd like to think that after that, the story and writing improve a lot, as I started thoroughly planning the story arcs and long term plot around the start of the third volume, somewhere around chapter 25-30. The feedback I've received seems to back that up, my early chapters get some rather mixed reactions, while my later chapters get mostly positive reactions. I encourage and appreciate all feedback and criticism, so feel free to speak your mind if and when you comment or review this book. Through past criticism and suggestions from comments, I'd like to think that I've used those experiences to improve my writing and the story. If you're someone who's been reading this book already, I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy this story, and if you're just starting this book or are considering starting it, I encourage you do so and hope you enjoy it.
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LIKEis there a power/ranking system then? I just started reading
its_L:author san I am currently reading your novel and I have read around 13-14 chapters I just wanted to ask isn't there any ranking or level system or stages of like for mages I mean how to differentiate between stronger and weaker how do they even know?