ZedomLv134yr

2020-06-20 20:48

This is my first review but I couldn't help myself. This story is pretty frustrating tbh... The Mc spends his entire life saying how he's gonna become the strongest trainer and get a huge harem. But that's not the bad thing, no because everyone is allowed to have their goals and dreams, but the bad thing is what he does his entire life to prepare for those grand goals, almost nothing lol. Let's take the becoming the strongest trainer part, first of all apparently he has a system but so far it's been so useless that there's not much difference if it's there or not, his whole life he's been training practically like a normal human, just from a young age, so right now he's just a strong normal human... Ever since he was 8 years old he had a ralts as a partner but for 8 years they were together (here they start their pokémon journey at 16) he hasn't done any training whatsoever with it (some might that it's too young or it's illegal because he can't have it as his official partner before he's 16 but that's a total pile of bull because he could've done at least some basic training with it even in secret), so his supposed "foundation building" is null. Forgot to mention that he spends 4 years helping at prof. Oak's lab but the only thing he learns is how, when, what to feed his pokémon 🤦🏼‍♂️. Now the harem part, Mc (author) wants such a huge harem that will practically contain all the beautiful women of the anime/games (again, that's not a bad thing, depending on how you do it of course), and that's what he keeps talking about all the time, but what does he do to at least be capable of providing for them? Nada, nothing at all, he literally starts his journey with 0 cash 🤣, he's been flirting with a milf for 8 years but all he got was a simple kiss when he's 16 on the day of his journey, that's all. Not to mention that he thinks way way more with his lower head than his upper one lol. Now don't get me wrong, I'm not trashing on the story, the story is very well written with practically no grammar mistakes, just that those parts and some others are beyond annoying so I had to stop for now, and for those that will say "oh you just read a couple of chapters and gave a review without giving it a chance", this review was done after chapter 30ish.

True Conquest of Another World

Xrkerr

4.0

78 Chs