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ElizaA
ElizaALv34yr
2020-09-05 09:06

Stop romanticizing rape. Stop making girls fall in love with their rapists. No one gives a damn if the rapist is rich. I lasted a fat 11 chapters and really couldn't read anymore. You're better off reading something else. First, sloppy writing. No intros and we're just thrown in a world of characters and schemes. Second, RAPE. Domineering trash ML. Forces himself on her, embarrasses her in front of others, threatens her if she dares abort/take morning after pill. Really, if it's not consensual *** it's RAPE. FL falls for the whole aphrodisiac scheme and gets caught by the "bf", "friend" and whole family etc. Yada yada. Been there, done that. Read something else people.

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JS_3398
JS_3398Lv5

thanks for the timelg warning!

cwayy
cwayyLv12

so it's this bad.......... I hate trash like this

Happywowo
HappywowoLv14

Thanks for the warning!

Geraldine_Mangwiro
Geraldine_MangwiroLv1

That's true. Rape should not be taken lightly.

Magumi1
Magumi1Lv1

thanks for the warning!

Retrenity
RetrenityLv13

Uh oh!

Malyndagirl
MalyndagirlLv13

ThanK you for the warning I will not be reading this

witchdr30
witchdr30Lv14

Hate it when they try to glorify or justify rape 😡🤬

ModusOperandi
ModusOperandiLv5

Thanks for saving my time[img=recommend]

through_a_shell01
through_a_shell01Lv5

not into this kinda trash. thank you so much. your comment saved me from reading this

Wondabunny
WondabunnyLv11

true... almost every novels here are like this...

diavla
diavlaLv15

Thank you for the heads up! Hardly anyone ever has warnings regarding rape!!

sanaaashiyana315
sanaaashiyana315Lv13

it was mutual consent by she mistook the guy as her bf.. author plz clarify thngs when you are using these rated stuffs.. both author and commentor are wrong.. sry if i am wrong

Michele_Bouldin
Michele_BouldinLv13

I don't know how many have read any of the other stories on here, but they all have some sort of twisted sexual realities. Most of than start off with the female lead being drugged and raped only to realize that they had children by their rapist.

crispychilipotato
crispychilipotatoLv5

Thanks for the warning. I hate trash like this.

Cute_Dumpling
Cute_DumplingLv3

ElizaA, I've tried reading the book from your perspective but in my view of angle, it is something completely different. Although the FL did get raped, so what? She just cant go back in time and restart everything. So, wisely, she started moving on. Instead of remebering being raped, she just decided to live with it. If it were me in her situation, I would also move on. Yes, I may sound crazy and I know rape is a big crime, but what could you do in a situation like that? If you just lived in the past where you got raped, your present life, health, and mental health would slowly worsen. Although it would take some time to move from it, at least the ML is taking responsibility and caring for her, even though she completely forgot about him and even dated his brother. So in my opinion, this is the best rape can get. And the rapist being rich doesnt have a lot to do with it. Also, for a professional, this book's writing may be horrible, but for a novice it is at least something acceptable in a commoner's eyes. Although it could use a bit of work, it's the effort that counts. If I'm offending anyone here, which I probably am, I apologize but I cannot keep quite about my opinions. People should speak their mind! Just becasue a lot of people agree with one side, it doesnt mean others have to go with it to, just for APPEARENCES SAKE. Author, you have done a good job and your work, although a bit ordinary, is still good. Keep up the hard work! 😊 P.S. Just because a few people dont like your book, doesnt mean you have to stop writing. People write mostly for two reasons. 1. For enjoyment and 2. For the readers. I'm hoping you write for yourself and your enjoyment. If writing is your passion, then keep writing.

AngelicAthena
AngelicAthenaLv15

As a Being sexually abUsed and raped by my cousin when i was 9, Its been 20 years Now. I still cant forget, I have dark thoughts of toUrturing him.

Yebee
YebeeLv5

I support your opinion Selery, y'all should give this story a chance because it is worth it. The fact that someone posts something on review doesn't mean that you should judge it right away, it is your duty to read and give a judgement afterwards. ElizaA only read 11 chapters and she just concluded, read all the paragraphs and give a better judgement afterwards.

Cute_Dumpling:ElizaA, I've tried reading the book from your perspective but in my view of angle, it is something completely different. Although the FL did get raped, so what? She just cant go back in time and restart everything. So, wisely, she started moving on. Instead of remebering being raped, she just decided to live with it. If it were me in her situation, I would also move on. Yes, I may sound crazy and I know rape is a big crime, but what could you do in a situation like that? If you just lived in the past where you got raped, your present life, health, and mental health would slowly worsen. Although it would take some time to move from it, at least the ML is taking responsibility and caring for her, even though she completely forgot about him and even dated his brother. So in my opinion, this is the best rape can get. And the rapist being rich doesnt have a lot to do with it. Also, for a professional, this book's writing may be horrible, but for a novice it is at least something acceptable in a commoner's eyes. Although it could use a bit of work, it's the effort that counts. If I'm offending anyone here, which I probably am, I apologize but I cannot keep quite about my opinions. People should speak their mind! Just becasue a lot of people agree with one side, it doesnt mean others have to go with it to, just for APPEARENCES SAKE. Author, you have done a good job and your work, although a bit ordinary, is still good. Keep up the hard work! 😊 P.S. Just because a few people dont like your book, doesnt mean you have to stop writing. People write mostly for two reasons. 1. For enjoyment and 2. For the readers. I'm hoping you write for yourself and your enjoyment. If writing is your passion, then keep writing.
ElizaA
ElizaALv3

Usually I don't reply to others' opinions, but I have to highly disagree with your view on rape. I know a couple victims myself and it's not something you just magically "move on" from and pretend it didn't happen. You're treating it too lightly. Rape is more than physical harm and affects the person in every which way. Rape is a CRIME. What in the world is "best rape"? That's such a big offense to rape victims. Should they be grateful just because they survived? Is FL "lucky" to have her rapist dote on her? I think she'd rather not have been raped. And yes, the rapist being rich has everything to do with it. He wouldn't be ML if he couldn't provide for her. Woo her. If he wasn't rich and powerful, he would be in JAIL for his crime. So while you may think the ML is great, in my eyes, he's a criminal. No matter how well he treats her, it won't make up for the harm he placed on her...out of his own selfishness. He KNEW that she wasn't in her right state of mind and absolutely took advantage of that. Again, y'all are free to read anything you want. You can even be this book's #1 fan if you want. I'm not here to attack you on your preferences, I'm just here to defend my stance on rape.

Cute_Dumpling:ElizaA, I've tried reading the book from your perspective but in my view of angle, it is something completely different. Although the FL did get raped, so what? She just cant go back in time and restart everything. So, wisely, she started moving on. Instead of remebering being raped, she just decided to live with it. If it were me in her situation, I would also move on. Yes, I may sound crazy and I know rape is a big crime, but what could you do in a situation like that? If you just lived in the past where you got raped, your present life, health, and mental health would slowly worsen. Although it would take some time to move from it, at least the ML is taking responsibility and caring for her, even though she completely forgot about him and even dated his brother. So in my opinion, this is the best rape can get. And the rapist being rich doesnt have a lot to do with it. Also, for a professional, this book's writing may be horrible, but for a novice it is at least something acceptable in a commoner's eyes. Although it could use a bit of work, it's the effort that counts. If I'm offending anyone here, which I probably am, I apologize but I cannot keep quite about my opinions. People should speak their mind! Just becasue a lot of people agree with one side, it doesnt mean others have to go with it to, just for APPEARENCES SAKE. Author, you have done a good job and your work, although a bit ordinary, is still good. Keep up the hard work! 😊 P.S. Just because a few people dont like your book, doesnt mean you have to stop writing. People write mostly for two reasons. 1. For enjoyment and 2. For the readers. I'm hoping you write for yourself and your enjoyment. If writing is your passion, then keep writing.
mestika_babe
mestika_babeLv4

Yes.. fighting author

Cute_Dumpling:ElizaA, I've tried reading the book from your perspective but in my view of angle, it is something completely different. Although the FL did get raped, so what? She just cant go back in time and restart everything. So, wisely, she started moving on. Instead of remebering being raped, she just decided to live with it. If it were me in her situation, I would also move on. Yes, I may sound crazy and I know rape is a big crime, but what could you do in a situation like that? If you just lived in the past where you got raped, your present life, health, and mental health would slowly worsen. Although it would take some time to move from it, at least the ML is taking responsibility and caring for her, even though she completely forgot about him and even dated his brother. So in my opinion, this is the best rape can get. And the rapist being rich doesnt have a lot to do with it. Also, for a professional, this book's writing may be horrible, but for a novice it is at least something acceptable in a commoner's eyes. Although it could use a bit of work, it's the effort that counts. If I'm offending anyone here, which I probably am, I apologize but I cannot keep quite about my opinions. People should speak their mind! Just becasue a lot of people agree with one side, it doesnt mean others have to go with it to, just for APPEARENCES SAKE. Author, you have done a good job and your work, although a bit ordinary, is still good. Keep up the hard work! 😊 P.S. Just because a few people dont like your book, doesnt mean you have to stop writing. People write mostly for two reasons. 1. For enjoyment and 2. For the readers. I'm hoping you write for yourself and your enjoyment. If writing is your passion, then keep writing.
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Ahmed_Ali_9237
Ahmed_Ali_9237Lv2

[MAY CONTAIN SPOILER] So as everyone else has stated this book does contain mention of RAPE. it's like most of the stories where the leads meet eachother due to this. so one thing I really don't understand is why are you all giving this book all the hate like there are books out there which have started off with RAPE and they are on the top list. now I also don't mean it's ok like to have these stuff, yeah I agree that we need to stop this and stop normalizing RAPE ⭐ So on the story, it's all the same plot with a bit of change:a shitty boyfriend,a girl whose jealous of the fl and the boyfriend uses her to cheat on fl, shameless snakeu 🐍relatives, and the most important one being MYSTERIOUS AND RICH FL(although his identity has been mentioned) ⭐So the change is that the fl doesn't fall for the ml after they do it and like both of them don't have any sort of feelings or maybe the ml like the fl. the feelings aren't in there out of nowhere. I think they would progress in future ⭐The fl isn't a sharp witted person but she isn't either that much naive. the fl is preggy( it's kinda new stuff as in most of the novels, fl doesn't like to be pretty early. I know it's their choice BUT IN IT THERE'S A CHANGE) ⭐One more thingy that I didn't ĺike was that the ml acted really goofy,sweet and stuff with fl infront of her mother buthe as acts kinda cold with her alone. I like the story line a lot and am curious how would the revenge would take place. the momma of the fl is pretty great too i liked her a lot I would recommend it to others but if you are sensitive about topics like RAPE don't read it IF ANYONE KNOWS INFORMATION OF RAW TITLE OF THE NOVEL PLEASE COMMENT thanks 👁👄👁 (d⁰nt hate me)

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