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It’s ‘Hey’ not hay This is hay
Years ago??? It’s barely been a year, months only
Dear Author, Please, please please please get a proof reader or get grammarly or something. Don’t ruin your story and cause confusion due to bad grammar and/or putting in the wrong words. Your story will be even better if the grammar is improved, will be smooth reading.
Relieved not relief
Success not succeed
Author: PLEASE - get grammarly or ask someone to proof read for you. You have a good story, don’t take away the enjoyment with poor grammar and misplaced words. Occasional mistakes are easily ignored but there are becoming too many now
What ‘happens’ with or to her - not ‘happened’. Happened is past tense, Kaos is asking about the future
‘We’re’ the dead bodies, not ‘was’
And their wives/lovers/mates! Literally all of them. Look at Xaden, Dacre, etc.
So many spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes. Author you have a good story, don’t ruin it by poor grammar, just proof read everything or get grammarly. It’ll make your books/stories even better quality