witchdr30

I’ll put it this way, it’s a good story, different from all the other shifter stories. Well thought out and executed characters. However the only thing putting this down and ruining it is the dismal grammar and inappropriately placed words. There are paragraphs which are incomprehensible, you just have to skip them. It’s a really good story and engaging and you are able to connect with the characters but as it continues the grammar gets worse. The writer needs to get a proof reader or grammarly app. If the mistakes are corrected it would be fantastic. Many others have mentioned grammarly in the comments as well - that’s the main and only complaint, but it’s enough to put one off.

Nothings making sense here. Please edit and use grammarly - don’t ruin a good thing!

The word you should use here is BRAVE not ‘dare’ I’m fed up of pointing out the mistakes but every now and then it gets too much and I have to say something. It ruins a good story.

What kind of jumbled mess is this?? Doesn’t make much sense - I see the words but not sure what you’re trying to say, past or present tense or future. For crying out loud! Do us all a favour and get grammarly or a proof reader. You have ruined your own story with all these mistakes.

‘In’ his expression Not ‘on’

Please 🙏 there are so many grammatical errors. Use grammarly if get a proof reader, sometimes it’s difficult to even make sense or understand what’s written.

Feelings for Erin or Keera?

AUTHOR: What do you mean by this messed up paragraph? There are words but they DONT MAKE SENSE!! For crying out loud, it’s not just spellings, spelling is fine but the words you used and placed DONT make sense - it’s just a jumble of words

Please work on the grammar, it’s so AWFUL! I’m struggling to understand what you’ve written and what you mean!

‘Loss’ not ‘lost’! Please get grammarly. There were so many mistakes in this chapter alone, it’s embarrassing. It ruins the flow of the story of e are trying to figure out what you actually mean and trying to makes sense of things.