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DawnSky
DawnSkyLv144yr
2020-10-04 12:38

Authors pedophilia kicks in around the mid 30 chapters. Can't recommend reading. MC pretty much gets everything handed to him on a silver platter, doesn't have to work for anything. As of chapter 30 MC can already run over 600km/hour attacking people however everyone can react and defend themselves in milliseconds regardless of what their abilities/perceptions/strengths are. Power scaling and rankings already seem pointless.

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NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12

so this one is a no go? welp... even that farming novel that i considered trash turned out to be good

Morggyb
MorggybLv5

Yooo the farming novel i thought would be trash honestly but OOHHHWEEE MOMMA😭😭😭”diary of a wimpy kid” was that mf tasty

NiceGuy:so this one is a no go? welp... even that farming novel that i considered trash turned out to be good
NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12

dont cry a*** *shhhh*shiii*shhh* they will be releasing 9 chapters today

Morggyb:Yooo the farming novel i thought would be trash honestly but OOHHHWEEE MOMMA😭😭😭”diary of a wimpy kid” was that mf tasty
Trah
TrahLv13

what's the farming novel?

NiceGuy:dont cry a*** *shhhh*shiii*shhh* they will be releasing 9 chapters today
NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12

everyone is doing Kung Fu

Trah:what's the farming novel?
AiNz
AiNzLv10

which farming novel...please tell. I love farming novel. In fact!! there's 3 novel about farm that i currently reading...

NiceGuy:so this one is a no go? welp... even that farming novel that i considered trash turned out to be good
NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12

everbody is kung fu search this

AiNz:which farming novel...please tell. I love farming novel. In fact!! there's 3 novel about farm that i currently reading...
AiNz
AiNzLv10

thanks

NiceGuy:everbody is kung fu search this
Xoul
XoulLv5

At least that one dose not really try for a serious approach.

NiceGuy:so this one is a no go? welp... even that farming novel that i considered trash turned out to be good
nurul_aulia_8062
nurul_aulia_8062Lv1

It's sick how the author describe avril😡 i drop this novel, after read that sentence..

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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

The Good thing about this novel is how well done the translation is. Beides a few minor troubles with the right vocabulary, but that might be because the original uses very hard to translate concepts, there is noting to complain. This is sadly not the case for the rest. Besides the stupid and illogical way the whole power/special ability system is presented, the whole story feels fractured. The flow is broken every few chapters to introduce new characters or motivations to destroy any kind of character impressions you had of the MC. It is literally a transformation from normal 9 to 5 worker, cowardly and meek, to a cutthroat assasin/businessman who enjoys killing, to a zealous cultivator, to a completely brain dead and high on power fool, to a lovestruck ape, to a responsible family guy, adopting useless baggage and carrying her trough supposedly life and death trials, and of course the always important nationalist. After reading more than 40 chapters I have seen many cliches, very few new ideas and there is still not a single positive or negative thing I can say about the MC. Worldbuilding/Background is one of the worst I have ever seen. There are literally thousands of other planets and possible alien races, but despite participating in a solar system wide event there is not a single description of an alien race. In general the reader has to imagine 90% because the author does not describe the places or people. The power system is even more flawed, just an example: Every being across multiple galaxies has the same brain structure and path of advancement, which means they are all human and have grown in the same environment, which explains a lot about this book, Not! According to the author there are different races, and planets which have developed 100s of times longer and use technology thousands of years in the future. Evolution or just the advancements brought by interstellar technology are just not a thing in this novel. Feels like if the British who used their technology to conquer dozens of nations and looked down on the aborigines are suddenly totally overrun and outgunned by a single village idiot who happens to gain the friendship and support of a deserter. At the same time there are many superfluous scenes, which increase word count and boredom in equal measures. To conclude, this novel is incomplete and needs to be reworked extensively before it can be called literature. The concept has potential, but the execution is rushed and majorly flawed. My Summary: An average guy gets lucky and optains the potential and resources to become powerful. Watch how he stumbles his way from an backwards nation into the middle of an intergalactic conflict. Follow him on his path of adventure, learning and personal growth.

Celascion
CelascionLv4

Hi, I'm the translator for this trial novel, hope everyone enjoys the read! Given how lacking the synopsis is (and seeing some of your responses to it), let me help and give you something more comprehensive. MC from Earth, China, gets mistaken for an Assassin that had killed some VIP (not known who or why yet), manages to negotiate himself some compensation for the mistake and requests the Gene Optimization Fluid, something that unlocks the 7th region of human's brain in this universe that already has an intergalactic human community, giving him a 'special ability'. Personally, I think the MC is the usual CN fare who will work really hard to cultivate/train, crafty because he isn't strong, but powerful when actually fighting. What's great about the novel is the author's attempt at world building, throwing in certain aspects of normal events, and adding additional complications or a twist to the resolution. The 60 chapters so far has him confined to Earth, but after, the story will start doing space travel, so no need to worry about inconsistencies with local geography. Of course, I won't say I'm great at translating, but I think I did a fairly good job here, and the pace of story progression do not feel too forced and will span over years. Almost a year goes by after the first 60 chapters, so that should more or less set the stage for expectations, with around 2 mini and 2 major arcs. TL;DR: An enjoyable read with an MC that won't be too OP, but will grow at OP rates, given how much the world will eventually expand. As a completed novel with almost 1600 chapters in tow, there will be no lack of content if this gets picked up.

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