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Celascion
CelascionLv44yr
2020-09-19 18:56

Hi, I'm the translator for this trial novel, hope everyone enjoys the read! Given how lacking the synopsis is (and seeing some of your responses to it), let me help and give you something more comprehensive. MC from Earth, China, gets mistaken for an Assassin that had killed some VIP (not known who or why yet), manages to negotiate himself some compensation for the mistake and requests the Gene Optimization Fluid, something that unlocks the 7th region of human's brain in this universe that already has an intergalactic human community, giving him a 'special ability'. Personally, I think the MC is the usual CN fare who will work really hard to cultivate/train, crafty because he isn't strong, but powerful when actually fighting. What's great about the novel is the author's attempt at world building, throwing in certain aspects of normal events, and adding additional complications or a twist to the resolution. The 60 chapters so far has him confined to Earth, but after, the story will start doing space travel, so no need to worry about inconsistencies with local geography. Of course, I won't say I'm great at translating, but I think I did a fairly good job here, and the pace of story progression do not feel too forced and will span over years. Almost a year goes by after the first 60 chapters, so that should more or less set the stage for expectations, with around 2 mini and 2 major arcs. TL;DR: An enjoyable read with an MC that won't be too OP, but will grow at OP rates, given how much the world will eventually expand. As a completed novel with almost 1600 chapters in tow, there will be no lack of content if this gets picked up.

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Hwanje
HwanjeLv11

Bro, what’s the Chinese name of this novel?

Hao_Abao
Hao_AbaoLv5

超级基因优化液

Hwanje:Bro, what’s the Chinese name of this novel?
dao_of_feminism
dao_of_feminismLv4

Any harem?

Celascion
CelascionLv4

No. There will be many potential love interests, but he'll only be with just the one later on, tying the knot and everything

dao_of_feminism:Any harem?
Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15

Hi translator. Thanks for the information 👍 🧐 I will definitely check it out 🧐

Skaz
SkazLv15

Can you just not copy that as the synopsis? xD Or something like Translator synopsis: (your text) But thx I check it out :)

Celascion
CelascionLv4

No can do. That's altering more than original text. Besides, the lack of information really adds to the mystery I think haha

Skaz:Can you just not copy that as the synopsis? xD Or something like Translator synopsis: (your text) But thx I check it out :)
CloverLuck
CloverLuckLv4

This novel dropped by author... You can search it

ysinner_13
ysinner_13Lv4

This novel was dropped by the author so would we get an ending for this novel or are we wasting time reading a novel which is deemed to have no end?

Ezzaldien_s
Ezzaldien_sLv3

Chh

Ezzaldien_s
Ezzaldien_sLv3

Ffghh

Ezzaldien_s:Chh
Celascion
CelascionLv4

It wasn't dropped. Author gave it an ending and everything, though it was fairly abrupt and people felt it was rushed. I haven't gotten there yet myself, but from what I can tell, it has an open ended sort ending, kind of like the end of Inception.

ysinner_13: This novel was dropped by the author so would we get an ending for this novel or are we wasting time reading a novel which is deemed to have no end?
Max255
Max255Lv6

Tell me one thing. Are you going to stick to the end? Or going to stop translating halfway?

Celascion:It wasn't dropped. Author gave it an ending and everything, though it was fairly abrupt and people felt it was rushed. I haven't gotten there yet myself, but from what I can tell, it has an open ended sort ending, kind of like the end of Inception.
eziovi
ezioviLv5

Chapter 7 and it's already filled with nationalism, enjoyable read? more like disappointment. I don't know how you don't have a problem translating this kind of racism content. Maybe it's because you're Chinese?

Celascion
CelascionLv4

Because it's about space, and nations become irrelevant as the story goes on. But I understand if that puts you off. A lot of chinese novels are written with the expectation that only chinese people will read it though, so they tend to be a little nationalistic and such. It's the nature of the business/content. All I can do is pick the works that explore interesting themes and concepts other novels have yet to tread before. Cheers!

eziovi:Chapter 7 and it's already filled with nationalism, enjoyable read? more like disappointment. I don't know how you don't have a problem translating this kind of racism content. Maybe it's because you're Chinese?
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

If you are the translator then why are you translating a LN that was dropped back in 2018 and was never finished? It was even originally Published by Qidian (now called Webnovel for English readers) and they are the ones who dropped it. Why do they have this being translated since they were the ones who dropped it?

saito258
saito258Lv13

I THINK THERE IS MISS CONCEPTION ABOUT YOUR LITTLE NATIONALISM.

Celascion:Because it's about space, and nations become irrelevant as the story goes on. But I understand if that puts you off. A lot of chinese novels are written with the expectation that only chinese people will read it though, so they tend to be a little nationalistic and such. It's the nature of the business/content. All I can do is pick the works that explore interesting themes and concepts other novels have yet to tread before. Cheers!
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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

The Good thing about this novel is how well done the translation is. Beides a few minor troubles with the right vocabulary, but that might be because the original uses very hard to translate concepts, there is noting to complain. This is sadly not the case for the rest. Besides the stupid and illogical way the whole power/special ability system is presented, the whole story feels fractured. The flow is broken every few chapters to introduce new characters or motivations to destroy any kind of character impressions you had of the MC. It is literally a transformation from normal 9 to 5 worker, cowardly and meek, to a cutthroat assasin/businessman who enjoys killing, to a zealous cultivator, to a completely brain dead and high on power fool, to a lovestruck ape, to a responsible family guy, adopting useless baggage and carrying her trough supposedly life and death trials, and of course the always important nationalist. After reading more than 40 chapters I have seen many cliches, very few new ideas and there is still not a single positive or negative thing I can say about the MC. Worldbuilding/Background is one of the worst I have ever seen. There are literally thousands of other planets and possible alien races, but despite participating in a solar system wide event there is not a single description of an alien race. In general the reader has to imagine 90% because the author does not describe the places or people. The power system is even more flawed, just an example: Every being across multiple galaxies has the same brain structure and path of advancement, which means they are all human and have grown in the same environment, which explains a lot about this book, Not! According to the author there are different races, and planets which have developed 100s of times longer and use technology thousands of years in the future. Evolution or just the advancements brought by interstellar technology are just not a thing in this novel. Feels like if the British who used their technology to conquer dozens of nations and looked down on the aborigines are suddenly totally overrun and outgunned by a single village idiot who happens to gain the friendship and support of a deserter. At the same time there are many superfluous scenes, which increase word count and boredom in equal measures. To conclude, this novel is incomplete and needs to be reworked extensively before it can be called literature. The concept has potential, but the execution is rushed and majorly flawed. My Summary: An average guy gets lucky and optains the potential and resources to become powerful. Watch how he stumbles his way from an backwards nation into the middle of an intergalactic conflict. Follow him on his path of adventure, learning and personal growth.

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