Review Detail of _Daulla in Return of the last survivor

Well the story is written pretty nicely. It binds the reader with story urging them to think what's next will be there in story for them. The characters bulid up is also great with their skills. Overall the apoloclyps theme is well suited too . There is not much grammatical errors which is nice again but I feel there is too much information and explanation give.You could just casually describe a character or a scene without adding additional details . No doubt story has great potential 🤗