Review Detail of Breno_Ranyere in Return of the last survivor

Really fun and well written survival story. The pacing is really good, chapters just fly by really fast. The writing is very detailed, you can get a good grasp of what is going on. The overall is story is good, with the premise of a mc that has information on the situation and is using it to gain advantage in the battle being a very cool one. The magic elements sorta feel like they're just there for the sake of being there though. I feel this could just have been a zombie story with a mc that has inside information and we wouldn't lose much. Also wish we would get less narration and more dialogue at times cause the dialogue is really fun.