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Ordinarystranger71
Ordinarystranger71Author3yrOrdinarystranger71

Well this is my second review ‘cause I thought that the first one was somewhat misleading. The protagonist, a rational person. A cold character with severe schizophrenia and emotionally unstable. The schizophrenia would be fixed later. He will act on benefit and logic. If he is kind then there is benefit involved. The world description is the extraordinary pathway is the genetic pathway. Inside some special monsters there are gene, in various forms. Some stones, some spiritual but just think that its kind of like an inheritance. Even if the monster is a spirit there is a chance of getting a gene. Like before I suggest reading it only after it has reached 50 chapters, well it is soon anyways. Don’t expect a hypocritical or kind or a saint protagonist. In some chapters early, the schizophrenic side may have influenced him, if it feels strange and stupid to you, don’t mind it it will be fixed. Not lure villainous but rational and in some cases mad. Severe laughing problem. There will be no female protagonist or wife and no romance. The world is influenced by genes, people’s personality and physical bodies would be changed by the gene. There are innate awakened genes people who are natural talents. The description would be explained later. It is possible for a kind hearted saint to become a massacring demon because of the influence of their gene. Resisting it with willpower would be hard and it will lower the quality so most people would choose to just adapt to it and change. The protagonist would be a mastermind the chess player. At the start he is 13 but going through he will get older. You shouldn’t expect him to be a world class genius. Hundreds of years would go on when he’a just researching. Except for some few there wasn’t any novel I liked, so decided to write my own novel. I suggest that if your a fan of WMW Terror Infinity Reincarnation Paradise Reverend Insanity you should write your own novels too. ‘Cause there are just too few of them.

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DeathWalker13
DeathWalker13Lv1DeathWalker13

errrrrrrr🤔

peaceful_asura
peaceful_asuraLv3peaceful_asura

I have never seen an author rate his work less than five stars. So, should I consider that even you, yourself don't like the story that much?

Ordinarystranger71
Ordinarystranger71AuthorOrdinarystranger71

No, its more like I won’t want it to be over rated and I just felt that being shameless wasn’t a good option for me.

peaceful_asura:I have never seen an author rate his work less than five stars. So, should I consider that even you, yourself don't like the story that much?
Genocidal_Soul
Genocidal_SoulLv3Genocidal_Soul

Bump

LeyNing
LeyNingLv6LeyNing

you should be pin this, my thoughts

Ordinarystranger71
Ordinarystranger71AuthorOrdinarystranger71

Ok

LeyNing:you should be pin this, my thoughts
Ordinarystranger71
Ordinarystranger71AuthorOrdinarystranger71

ok

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Kyur0
Kyur0Lv5Kyur0

I feel you, WMW was such a good read that everything you read afterwards just seems lacking... I'll try yours !

tahafury
tahafuryLv5tahafury

try Reverend Insanity, The Legendary Mechanic or Lord of the Mysteries

Kyur0:I feel you, WMW was such a good read that everything you read afterwards just seems lacking... I'll try yours !
ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6ExodusGaming555

honestly, you should just have make it a 5 star. a review is a subjective way for readers to rate and give opinion about the novel overall. but an authors review on the other hand is a way to give readers a more detailed insight on certain aspect of the content that can't be expressed/written in the synopsis or the chapter itself. in my opinion the star that the author give in his/her review is a show of how confident they are in the novel itself and not some shameless attitude to gain a more higher rating (some author do have it 5 star just for the rating though).

Ordinarystranger71:No, its more like I won’t want it to be over rated and I just felt that being shameless wasn’t a good option for me.
NotPickleRick
NotPickleRickLv1NotPickleRick

NO ROMANCE LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Zeit_Haere
Zeit_HaereLv3Zeit_Haere

use grammary to correct grammar and word with googledoc for it.

Vladarius
VladariusLv5Vladarius

try getting some newb editors, i mean free ones, maybe you will find a person who is pretty good.

Vladarius
VladariusLv5Vladarius

or get Grammarly, its a google extension app and its free.

horlakint
horlakintLv10horlakint

Good

matthew_scott
matthew_scottLv4matthew_scott

this would really be turned into a comic as well

CHAOS
CHAOSLv11CHAOS

Lol no female protagonists, never heard that in a while hope its Good