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Imperial_Fox
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2020-05-12 06:00

It's good. Also available on MTL novel. Com but it is barely understandable there so I just did some editing and and improved the vocabulary a little bit and posted the chapters here.

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Imperial_Fox
Imperial_FoxAuthor

Yeah

FrangKenStain
FrangKenStainLv3

Thank you for editing it ...

OverkillBills
OverkillBillsLv5

theres so many good stories like this its sad that no one translates them

Conquestor
ConquestorLv4

Why are you not updating?

Red_Mercy007
Red_Mercy007Lv12

when is it going to be updated? please do not stop

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The_Zombie_Lad
The_Zombie_LadLv3

This has some spoilers but I'm only 3 chapters in and dropping it, here's why. The grammar is MTL, I honestly have no problem with that, MTL isn't that bad to me but it can annoy some other people especially when the words are phrased as they are here. My second point the author is Chinese, I have no problem with the Chinese and some of the novels on this site are my favorites but their way of speaking and expressing is just strange. The make matters worse they implemented that speech on everyone. To give an example in the 3rd chapter an American in WW2 says this (paraphrased not 100% accurate): "How dare you Asian dog stop this great one's car!?" an American in WW2, I think that you get my point. The MC isn't much of a villain, again I only read 3 chapters but his definition of a villain is someone who does whatever he wants regardless of the rules or what anyone thinks. Is that what a villain should be thinking? Does the Joker think that? Thanos? Demogorgon? No villain thinks or has an attitude like that, that's an anti-hero. It doesn't matter that you kill the MC if you save 100 000 lives, that doesn't mean that you are a villain it means that you are an anti-hero. The MC gets a system but the rules are not defined at all, it says that no movies all ever interact but the second rules say that consecutive movies interact. What I get from this is that even if he kills Captain America in WW2 when he goes to Endgame that won't have any effect cause they are different universes altogether. With that being said if he kills Captian America in WW2 and then goes to Winter Soldier Captain America will be dead, do I even need to explain why this is stupid!? There are also some other problems but this is the short version of it, I don't want to waste any more time on this than I already have.

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