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2021-03-17 00:22

this novel is really good and one of the best and also deserves a five star but when will you update this really good novel, please update it.

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This has some spoilers but I'm only 3 chapters in and dropping it, here's why. The grammar is MTL, I honestly have no problem with that, MTL isn't that bad to me but it can annoy some other people especially when the words are phrased as they are here. My second point the author is Chinese, I have no problem with the Chinese and some of the novels on this site are my favorites but their way of speaking and expressing is just strange. The make matters worse they implemented that speech on everyone. To give an example in the 3rd chapter an American in WW2 says this (paraphrased not 100% accurate): "How dare you Asian dog stop this great one's car!?" an American in WW2, I think that you get my point. The MC isn't much of a villain, again I only read 3 chapters but his definition of a villain is someone who does whatever he wants regardless of the rules or what anyone thinks. Is that what a villain should be thinking? Does the Joker think that? Thanos? Demogorgon? No villain thinks or has an attitude like that, that's an anti-hero. It doesn't matter that you kill the MC if you save 100 000 lives, that doesn't mean that you are a villain it means that you are an anti-hero. The MC gets a system but the rules are not defined at all, it says that no movies all ever interact but the second rules say that consecutive movies interact. What I get from this is that even if he kills Captain America in WW2 when he goes to Endgame that won't have any effect cause they are different universes altogether. With that being said if he kills Captian America in WW2 and then goes to Winter Soldier Captain America will be dead, do I even need to explain why this is stupid!? There are also some other problems but this is the short version of it, I don't want to waste any more time on this than I already have.

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