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Review Detail of Lackies in I'll Add Points To All Things

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Lackies
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Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures . As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.

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