Good story and a good concept, it was an enjoyable read. You have put effort and thought into the characters and story and made it very interesting. The introduction of the MC is done very well, and her dominance compared to others could clearly be seen. I think you could have extended the dialogue with the first criminal, that would have been my preference. But it is not an issue, and the story is still good. I like how you were able to show the link of the story to the genres so early in the story. This allows the readers to get exactly what they signed up for. There are some minor grammatical errors. Overall, a wonderful book and story.
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