The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator. A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.
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