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Akichi
AkichiLv64yr
2020-08-08 09:44

OK, this is my second review on this novel, and although it is mostly the same thing as before, I have to say that the author's foreshadowing are worth looking into even if the start is somewhat horrendous whenever the Mc isn't around his parents or girlfriend. Overall, a great romance story, the author even being able to pull off a difficult tag such as harem thanks to his character creation abilities. Those guys grow on you like a fungus, but in a good way. The Mc himself is sometimes infuriating, but as you watch his thought process for longer, you will inevitably understand what the author is trying to make of the reader-MC connection. I could talk more about this or that development, but just the fact someone pulled those kinds of plot points successfully makes me want to femboy, nevermind the respect that blossomed from all the proper discussions and dialogs, which lead me to write this relatively long review and not want to hide it behind some block.

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NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

Thanks for the review 😊

TheLastAuditor
TheLastAuditorLv3

FEMBOY ALERTED

DarylArradaza
DarylArradazaLv3

is this really a harem? because I like harems.

Mystic_LordAthens
Mystic_LordAthensLv2

I feel challenged by my herd mentality

User_Name_6006
User_Name_6006Lv3

yes

Hosps
HospsLv11

ye

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

does the MC know all of the love interests IRL?

NoWoRRyMaN:Thanks for the review 😊
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

All his love interest are from the real world, so yes.

Malcolm_Massey:does the MC know all of the love interests IRL?
Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

ok good, I hate when harem stories in VR world don't actually know each other in the real world. thanks for the response.

NoWoRRyMaN:All his love interest are from the real world, so yes.
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

No worries. I hate that trope too.

Malcolm_Massey:ok good, I hate when harem stories in VR world don't actually know each other in the real world. thanks for the response.
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

Hey, so I read the tags and there is one thing that worries me, is that NTR? Because I won't ever read such stories!

NoWoRRyMaN:No worries. I hate that trope too.
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNAuthor

No NTR

Jasonenrick:Hey, so I read the tags and there is one thing that worries me, is that NTR? Because I won't ever read such stories!
INSANITY
INSANITYLv3

All i see is "I'm a femboy" U _ U

Redgar_347
Redgar_347Lv13

Lol nowadays everyone before reading is like "Hey is it Ntr??"

Jasonenrick:Hey, so I read the tags and there is one thing that worries me, is that NTR? Because I won't ever read such stories!
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

Yeah, because NTR is a gay Tag that no one likes, and I netter ask the question before wasting my time,

Redgar_347:Lol nowadays everyone before reading is like "Hey is it Ntr??"
infintyxdead23
infintyxdead23Lv4

facts

Jasonenrick:Yeah, because NTR is a gay Tag that no one likes, and I netter ask the question before wasting my time,
blobbombs
blobbombsLv13

author sama when did u change the name of the novel. and y I am very confused

NoWoRRyMaN:Thanks for the review 😊
Atul_dadhwal
Atul_dadhwalLv4

yeah

TheLastAuditor
TheLastAuditorLv3

based

Jasonenrick:Yeah, because NTR is a gay Tag that no one likes, and I netter ask the question before wasting my time,
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Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it.. 5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack. 6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments. 7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter 8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus) cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro) 2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it. 3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what. 5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO: - maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read - RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4) update: 8.5/10 (con-2) plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8) pacing: 8/10 (con-6) dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!! And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC may seem a little edgy. - rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil - sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho) - mc is dense af!

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