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Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv53yr
2021-04-01 02:04

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it.. 5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack. 6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments. 7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter 8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus) cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro) 2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it. 3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what. 5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO: - maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read - RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4) update: 8.5/10 (con-2) plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8) pacing: 8/10 (con-6) dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!! And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC may seem a little edgy. - rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil - sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho) - mc is dense af!

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akhilraj_277
akhilraj_277Lv4

thanks for the review I will go read it

Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5

welp as long as you're okay with slow pace that is🌚

akhilraj_277:thanks for the review I will go read it
akhilraj_277
akhilraj_277Lv4

yeah, that was the reason I am binging it now.

Crazy_Cronie_1:welp as long as you're okay with slow pace that is🌚
akhilraj_277
akhilraj_277Lv4

but I must say it is slow even though I was able to read it till chapter 60 in one day.

Crazy_Cronie_1:welp as long as you're okay with slow pace that is🌚
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