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RebeccaJWW
RebeccaJWWLv113yr
2021-06-05 13:32

I am only on ch 349, so my review is a little limited. I absolutely adore the ML. the MC is great and her grandma’s family is adorable. It is nicelt paced and doesnt drag much, but some things do feel a little obvious or for drama purposes only. On her father’s birthday, her and her son do this whole big dinner for him. he comes home drunk, smashes things wrecks everything and scares the child. She doesnt not move out and everything is forgiven within 24 hours. its not like she has no money or options for places to stay, and her father has always been a jerk. so there isnt really an emotional bond to keep playing off of. They could have left and then him having a moment of regret and asking them to come back. anything to make it not feel so much like the child’s safety wasnt a big deal. His behaviour, which happens every birthday seems to just be something everyone shrugs off instead of an obvious warning sign. Nobody is curious about her birth mother. He had a great love that he was with at the time so doesnt seem like he was sleeping around and there was no mention of an accident or some kind of event where he was drugged or had sperm taken or anything, so how did she happen? The ex girlfriend happened to have a baby girl the same time and it died. i think that she is actually the baby and that will be a huge plot point, however, this isnt the first time i have read ths idea and i have to wonder about hospitals or places where the super rich and famous deliver their babies. so many times they are told the baby died. Then what? At full term, it seems like the mother would want to see or hold the child. have a funeral or a private burial or cremation. so there would have to be a dead baby, right? Its not like they say, your baby died. please leave and the mother would just walk out. The dad is a massive jerk. not even being sad for breaking up with his great love can explain him being such a tool. I have no idea why she is still living with him. The dance that the ML and MC are doing is also a bit annoying. its not a will they wont they or anything keeping them apart feally. they are practically a couple. i dont know why they arent kissing or doing anything to move forward together. Him having a mask and wheelchair is fake. so to outsiders that can be a problem, but we havent really gotten any details on whats going on with that. There is also a fued between him and her father which hasnt been explained, especially since it seems one sided. I am at the point where i want to either skim or start skipping chapters, which is not a good sign. i like so much of the story. i think this might be one of my fave ML, but am just getting a bit bothered by things that seem like they could be fixed or addressed if people talked about things. i realise this would mean less chapters or drama, but surely there are other ways?

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venice_
venice_Lv4

it's been 300+ chapters and the misunderstandings are still not clear? I'm not gonna continue reading this anymore, I'm at 200+ chapters and it's getting boring and boring. good thing i have read your review. u just save me from reading more 😂

Katherine_Tesla
Katherine_TeslaLv15

Thank you for your review. You saved me time from reading something I won't enjoy.

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ElizaA
ElizaALv3

Hmm.. I'm on the fence, 39 ch in. PROS: not the typical transmigration novel, not the typical FL CONS: not exactly a fan of FL ___ Basically FL lands in the body of a third-rate scheming b*tch, and usually in other novels, they miraculously fix their personality and become kind right? LOL nope, not in this one. Her acting skills get better and she's no longer interested in the main actor, but her personality is quite... something. She's loud, outspoken, "my way or the highway", and has almost no sense of shame or embarrassment? Like it's hard to connect with her and love her because she's just so 4D absurd. She's still kind of evil and plots her way into advantages so it's not even like she has a clean slate. *AND she'd never get away with her tactics if it wasn't for the support/sudden appearance of ML or dad who she doesn't appreciate enough and is taking adv of. At this point, I'm not even rooting for her. Yknow in other novels you feel bad for the FL and you're like "poor bb you don't deserve this, LET'S GET REVENGE". But here I'm kinda like "mmm girl, sorry but you kind of deserve lmao." I just want her to be a good human and fix her relationships with people (dad, ML). She purposely sought ML out because his body's weak and she'll be rich if he dies. She's taking shelter/money/babysitting from dad & acts like a tsundere and is fighting with him all the time. The bickering with her dad is somewhat entertaining in the beginning and then as you keep reading you kind of just want them to stop being annoying. Her redeeming qualities? I guess she's a good mom and loves her new son like it's her own. Their relationship is cute. Tldr: It's definitely different but my brain hurts reading it. Reading about this FL and her interactions with others...sighs.

Little_Lord
Little_LordLv14

To be honest, I won’t hIghly recomment it to anyone because i find a few Points I’m not satisfied with here. 1. MC is too much of a clingy, she always clings to ML no matter who forbide her to. ( She doesn’t really any reasons to do so to begin with. And she stated at the beginning, she just wanted a part of his inheritance cos he will die in 2 yrs. Everyone told her that he’s Heartless and ruthless, but she never listens.) 2. MC has a lot of Talents, but she isn’T independence, she always reLy on those around her. Too much dependence I would say. 3. She always angry when her father bad mouths her and Her son, but what did she do for her son? When She’s free, she rather spend her time on a vacation to Europe with ML rather than her son. She had 2 tIckets for vacations, but she asked ML to travel with her rather than her pitiful son. She always abondon him whenever he needs her the most. I know he is not her real son(transmigrated soul), but she should thinks of him now that she has him with her. She said he is pitiful and understanding cos original body owner abondoned him several times already, so she should at least fill in those space in his heart cos he already dOesn’t have father figure and with abusive grandfather always With him. 4. That grandfather figure, I hate him the most in this novel, He is give abusive and rude, even he didn’t mean it but he did it a lot of times to 3 yrs old child and his own daughter. I don’t want to comments more here cos i really really really hate him. 5. MC WAS RAPED BY ML IN THE PAST. I haven’t read into the situation yet, but there’s a chapter when MC memory played when she was forced to have s6x by ML in the past, that’s why she Love/Hate her son at the same time cos he reminded her of that time and he’s the reason she can’t be with someone else(obstacle).[original owner thought]. 6. There are a few pLot holes out there, you will read Soon. As at chapter 300, when ML disgusted as a professor, she should have realise it’s ML. Why? She just sat opposite each other at the cafeteria a moment ago, then she walked for a short distance, ML came in the car with his driver to pick her up. ( HE HADN’T CHANGED HIS CLOTHES AT ALL AND JUST A FEW MINUTES AND SHE DIDN’T RECOGNISE HIM JUST BECAUSE HE WORE MASKED????, SERIOUSLY????!!!)

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