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Kaylamatea
KaylamateaLv154yr
2020-11-23 00:46

I'm really disappointed at this story. The start was really promising but the plot degenerated into nothing after. Not only does nothing move, there are messy elements thrown in here and there. The exciting drama of father vs suitor became trite and convoluted. I don't even think the FL has a personality by this point, just a series of flirty actions with the ML and sudden moments of 'badass-ness' which aren't well-written at all. Even worse is the ML, who is just popping up all over the place like he has no story of his own. The father just swings on a pendulum of 'I hate this slur on my reputation' and 'oh, she's so cute my kokoro doki doki'. Nobody makes any sense. Everything is a tool to show off. But the worst part is that the showing off and face-slapping is just poorly done and distasteful.

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ElizaA
ElizaALv3

Hmm.. I'm on the fence, 39 ch in. PROS: not the typical transmigration novel, not the typical FL CONS: not exactly a fan of FL ___ Basically FL lands in the body of a third-rate scheming b*tch, and usually in other novels, they miraculously fix their personality and become kind right? LOL nope, not in this one. Her acting skills get better and she's no longer interested in the main actor, but her personality is quite... something. She's loud, outspoken, "my way or the highway", and has almost no sense of shame or embarrassment? Like it's hard to connect with her and love her because she's just so 4D absurd. She's still kind of evil and plots her way into advantages so it's not even like she has a clean slate. *AND she'd never get away with her tactics if it wasn't for the support/sudden appearance of ML or dad who she doesn't appreciate enough and is taking adv of. At this point, I'm not even rooting for her. Yknow in other novels you feel bad for the FL and you're like "poor bb you don't deserve this, LET'S GET REVENGE". But here I'm kinda like "mmm girl, sorry but you kind of deserve lmao." I just want her to be a good human and fix her relationships with people (dad, ML). She purposely sought ML out because his body's weak and she'll be rich if he dies. She's taking shelter/money/babysitting from dad & acts like a tsundere and is fighting with him all the time. The bickering with her dad is somewhat entertaining in the beginning and then as you keep reading you kind of just want them to stop being annoying. Her redeeming qualities? I guess she's a good mom and loves her new son like it's her own. Their relationship is cute. Tldr: It's definitely different but my brain hurts reading it. Reading about this FL and her interactions with others...sighs.

Little_Lord
Little_LordLv14

To be honest, I won’t hIghly recomment it to anyone because i find a few Points I’m not satisfied with here. 1. MC is too much of a clingy, she always clings to ML no matter who forbide her to. ( She doesn’t really any reasons to do so to begin with. And she stated at the beginning, she just wanted a part of his inheritance cos he will die in 2 yrs. Everyone told her that he’s Heartless and ruthless, but she never listens.) 2. MC has a lot of Talents, but she isn’T independence, she always reLy on those around her. Too much dependence I would say. 3. She always angry when her father bad mouths her and Her son, but what did she do for her son? When She’s free, she rather spend her time on a vacation to Europe with ML rather than her son. She had 2 tIckets for vacations, but she asked ML to travel with her rather than her pitiful son. She always abondon him whenever he needs her the most. I know he is not her real son(transmigrated soul), but she should thinks of him now that she has him with her. She said he is pitiful and understanding cos original body owner abondoned him several times already, so she should at least fill in those space in his heart cos he already dOesn’t have father figure and with abusive grandfather always With him. 4. That grandfather figure, I hate him the most in this novel, He is give abusive and rude, even he didn’t mean it but he did it a lot of times to 3 yrs old child and his own daughter. I don’t want to comments more here cos i really really really hate him. 5. MC WAS RAPED BY ML IN THE PAST. I haven’t read into the situation yet, but there’s a chapter when MC memory played when she was forced to have s6x by ML in the past, that’s why she Love/Hate her son at the same time cos he reminded her of that time and he’s the reason she can’t be with someone else(obstacle).[original owner thought]. 6. There are a few pLot holes out there, you will read Soon. As at chapter 300, when ML disgusted as a professor, she should have realise it’s ML. Why? She just sat opposite each other at the cafeteria a moment ago, then she walked for a short distance, ML came in the car with his driver to pick her up. ( HE HADN’T CHANGED HIS CLOTHES AT ALL AND JUST A FEW MINUTES AND SHE DIDN’T RECOGNISE HIM JUST BECAUSE HE WORE MASKED????, SERIOUSLY????!!!)

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