Review Detail of LaDiDah in Lumia: Other World

I very much enjoyed reading this one, and it was an instant library add for me. I loved all the punchy lane-changes in the first chapter. Has all of my favorite genres rolled into one, so it grabbed my attention straight away. I also enjoyed the voice of the author, which I found to be crisp and clear with a refreshing undercurrent of comedic impact. Only feedback is being nitpicky over grammar issues that may be a distraction for some, but it didn’t detract from my enjoyment. Grab onto a native English editor and it would just help to button-up the great work you have.