Review Detail of Bogdan7 in Lumia: Other World

Item: Lumia: Other World
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

Bogdan7Lv53yrBogdan7

Again, a story very poorly written, grammar and story development....you will see traces of its rank beeing boosted all over the place. I don't recommend reading this....

Lumia: Other World

Mel_Aniv

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Bogdan7Lv5Bogdan7

as for a book I think its ok... Otherworld adventure is pretty good but recently it had a bad update rate....

3yr

Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Thanks for the review! I hope you find the novel you will love! Can you recommend me novels that was on your taste? I am curious!

3yr

Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Also please critique my other book. waking up in undead world....

3yr

Bogdan7Lv5Bogdan7

well, as I said, the grammar is pretty bad, some of the sentences are incoherent and its like i'm jumping over paragraphs.... reading the 1st, jumping over the 2nd and going for the 3rd or 4th....

3yr