I was sarcastic....
Suna??? who are they?
as for a book I think its ok... Otherworld adventure is pretty good but recently it had a bad update rate....
well, as I said, the grammar is pretty bad, some of the sentences are incoherent and its like i'm jumping over paragraphs.... reading the 1st, jumping over the 2nd and going for the 3rd or 4th....
Ned is a male so use he/him/his
I see that this mistake keeps repeating ....it's not 153 over 601...this means 601+153.....it's 153 out of 601
Man you are riled up :)) Usually the way a person with such power will see you as an asset, if he cant have him he cant let his enemies/rivals/competition have him, its like paying your enemy's army to fight against you. But its the author's fault that we are in this position...he should have given more info about this so we wouldn't argue about this.
AGAIN 'steal from him'
told you a few times this is incorrect....stop making this mistake
a spark under water....hmmm
but fighting with the Cyclops for a few mins was ok???
cant use eyes but can use ears?
really? come on man ..... then showvher the elemental too....
what was the point of the hidden test then if you will 'shape' the students to be like the ones that failed it??