This story is a fresh breath of aor. Like seriously, how come reincarnated people dont question the stupidity of the cultivators. But the MC here actually rebukes and is annoyed by that. This is a great fanfic. Keep it up.

I don’t see how this is rated so high. This is one of the worst fanfics I’ve ever read. MC looks down on ppl in the cultivation world which I’m okay with. But then suddenly he meets the Phoenix village and acts all chummy with them. Cmon author at least make his character consistent. Another thing I hate is how the author chooses to make the sister suffer a tragedy just so MC can be ‘grey character’ but in reality he’s just an arrogant prick. The author said in a footnote that some young master in the clan was jealous and made his sister a servant. And going by typical cultivation world young master standards, she probably was either r*ped or tortured before being killed. None of these are clarified, however, because the beginning is so f*cking vague . Literally the MC just says he killed the sect to take revenge. And that’s it. No details no nothing. Overall it’s a really frustrating read only for those who are ok with bad grammar, inconsistent character, and vague plot. However keep in mind that I’ve haven’t read too many chapters so author might’ve gotten better later on in the story. Who knows? This was just too sh*tty for me to continue so I had to drop it and rant here in the reviews.

After reading upto chapter 10 i hate the mc already. He disliked the young master arrogance but he was more arrogant than them. And then he was like. Too cocky when he was fighting weak enemies and say theres no challenge on it. But when he face stronger enemies he used poison lol. That was stupid He wants more battle challenhe then when

Fantastic fanfic. Not in the canon town. Adds a interesting twist , first few chaps are iffy but once you get past it you see the the connection to story and timeline , very good . Need more to read

Pretty much the author tells us everything and nothing is written out into detail. We got a hypocrite MC who magically becomes stronger and murders others for no good reason. Apparently he is the smartest person in the world and knows how to cultivate correctly. Thats not all either, the MC doesn't even save his sister after killing those who provided for him. This fic is worse than the general chinese fics. At least they have a proper story.

Mc waste his time building house for two months for no reason with no progress at cultivation. WTH, even bast*rd yun che would train desperately and jump realms in two months. He lift curse in a village for "alliance" even though he let her sister to be used by anyone and there's no further info about her even though author made mc destroy the sect but he leaves the sister and never mention it again in the story.

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I've read other stories of this author, so I can honestly say that it's very visible that it's the first fanfic. Grammar is worse and the MC is unbearable - he is a true hypocrite and a typical young master.

Stories interesting but dont make MC a cultivation idiot-ie: a person that shows off, is stupid and dosnt think **** through, so far its dosnt seem like MC is an idiot so yah, dont do it,,,smart calculative secretive MCs' are always dope. It would be interesting to read about the MC using modern knowledge for his advantage, like using physics, chem and bio for his attacks cultivation or some ****, would be cool Also just saying, the way MC is screaming out attacks is pretty stupid, IDK its weird, maybe not do it, plus its a weakness [ i hope I dont have to explain why its a weakness].... add some romance and fluff, just build it and dont make it retarded or cliche or shallow or some separation ****, and pls dont make harem massive. and no wives or moms Also dude, gave you one star for CD cause, I dont really think a child that got saved from kidnapping would be that friendly or open, or even would want to play with a stranger..so yah...try to build your CD, cause no offense right now its pretty much non-existent, [ by CD I mean relationships] **: what happened to the family and the sis? [Also the sis, you said that she became a servant to someone right?...kinda stupid cause MC was a genius under an elder, dude could've just protected sis---dont make mistakes like this.........no bash, just saying] anyway GL, dont make this cliche [just suggestions]

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