I don’t see how this is rated so high. This is one of the worst fanfics I’ve ever read. MC looks down on ppl in the cultivation world which I’m okay with. But then suddenly he meets the Phoenix village and acts all chummy with them. Cmon author at least make his character consistent. Another thing I hate is how the author chooses to make the sister suffer a tragedy just so MC can be ‘grey character’ but in reality he’s just an arrogant prick. The author said in a footnote that some young master in the clan was jealous and made his sister a servant. And going by typical cultivation world young master standards, she probably was either r*ped or tortured before being killed. None of these are clarified, however, because the beginning is so f*cking vague . Literally the MC just says he killed the sect to take revenge. And that’s it. No details no nothing. Overall it’s a really frustrating read only for those who are ok with bad grammar, inconsistent character, and vague plot. However keep in mind that I’ve haven’t read too many chapters so author might’ve gotten better later on in the story. Who knows? This was just too sh*tty for me to continue so I had to drop it and rant here in the reviews.
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The beginning wasn’t the best and I also considered dropping it but read past chapter 15 where it starts getting really good then consider if you should stop reading it.
Oh cmon it get better after a few chap and we even forget about his sister bruh
en serio?, se olvidan de su hermana?.....
Not sure why you would even care about the sister, she is mentioned in like 2 sentences :/
I had a sister, I've read this like 3 times, maybe more and I never remembered it existed.
