The writing is quite good (when compared to most stories on here). I also really like the plot idea. Every single ATG story we see is just Yun che bashing running around picking up xia qingyue. This one mixed it up a bit. It does have a lot of issues though. The MC can be described in three words. Pretentious As Fuck. It's incredibly annoying to read. He yells out his attacks, gives his attacks really grandiose names and looks down on EVERYONE. If the author read the story, he should know that higher cultivation levels up everything from intelligence to senses. There's no way some 12 y/o with barely any cultivation would be killing sky level beasts... I never thought I would see an MC more obnoxious than Yun Che but here we are. Story is also really confusing. There's a sister that is constantly talked about for the first 10 chapters but we don't see her at all? What's his goal?? He spends a chapter lecturing some goddess that's far far above him in strength, and at the end she's trying to seduce him? Lol, that's what made me drop the story. The story had a neat idea but it's clear to see there was no real plan and that the author is just writing it as he goes. I will say that this is still better than 80% of the stories on this site. Give it a try if you're bored.
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