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Gyifft
GyifftLv104yr
2020-09-02 01:22

Holy **** this is bad. it's like reading a story written by a 12 year old who can only use the same plot device over and over. But as you are on this site you don't give a crap about that and will love it! try it out today, you piece of **** with low reading comprehension!

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DaoistHarvey
DaoistHarveyLv13

You're the piece of sht, you said that this is written by 12 year old boy but I doubt you even knew most of the things mentioned in the novel, there are even college and professor level stuff in the novel

Aditya_Surana
Aditya_SuranaLv1

May I suggest reading on Novels,pl it edits the writing to make it more me=ature to a certain extent

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Lyandy10
Lyandy10Lv12

Receiving items from the far future to market in the present. I would split the novel into two sections, the reviewing and the MC’s life. I like the idea. He reviews products from the future on the internet via videos/livestreams and is paid with the product. He uses the products in his life and that’s what the novel is about. He gets a cool toy and we see what happens because of it. Most of the content is on his day to day life, mainly consisting of humor, character interactions, and random events (as I would describe it). This is by no means a serious novel (so far at least) so have an open mind as you read. The humor isn’t my cup of tea. It’s exaggerated and sometimes drawn out for too long. I’m also not a fan of the character interactions, his three younger sisters, yes three, are all bratty in their own ways. The way they act is fine but sometimes the way they act is not fine. Like when they work together to exploit their older brother, the MC. The parents I liked sometimes and sometimes not. And the teachers I definitely dislike. And then what’s left are random events that are scrambled in to show character interaction and bits of story to keep everything moving. For people that have read, the random events would be like the amusement park, the soda prank on the boy, and the jumping event. The story would be the dinner meeting, running from the teacher, and the exam. Breaking everything down, it doesn’t seem like that much or good at all but I enjoyed reading it. This review is pretty bad but what do you expect when it’s almost 7 AM.

FubarOne
FubarOneLv15

Ahhh another story with an interesting enough premise, made worse by a turd of an MC and the "comedy" that comes along with one. There's the usual trash trope of doing everything he can to hide what he's gained, while saying he needs to stay low key, but then does idiotic things for seemingly no reason that draws attention to himself. The translation is good at least, and the score is bumped up due to the fact it's a trial read and I'm not gonna drop the score for stability of updates. But the story development seems to be going nowhere fast as it keeps getting sidetracked with shenanigans, along with him only getting new products weekly so there'll likely be a lot of filler between things actually happening to improve his situation. For characters the MC is naturally a turd as mentioned before (greedy, scammy type that can't pull his head out of his posterior long enough to make use of what he has), while the comic relief in the form of his family isn't the worst, but will likely get old fast. World background is what it is, modern day but the MC's family is lower class and struggling, while the turd MC is making things more difficult for them through his greedy, scammy shenanigans. Sure he brought home a lavish meal he used his cheat to get from a restaurant in a nonsensical scenario, but the idiot can't even remember to pick up his sister from class which causes his mom to lose her job when the school calls and she has to pick her up. Overall, gave up at chapter 20, might read the rest when I'm out of everything else to read.

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