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TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv134yr
2020-07-25 05:02

Word Padding, has cliché's, and other reviews over hype it. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller

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ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

What is cliche about the novel?

Vyte
VyteLv11

please say that again when you have read more than 10+ chapters. There hasnt been many cliche's so far and its super fresh. dude fucking goes all in studying his own body and **** to the point of cutting flesh off to see what might happen with his new powers, how is that cliche?

MaouKun
MaouKunLv10

I have the urge to punch someone

TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

Bold of a person inflating reviews by putting down 2 5 star reviews to say.

Vyte:please say that again when you have read more than 10+ chapters. There hasnt been many cliche's so far and its super fresh. dude fucking goes all in studying his own body and **** to the point of cutting flesh off to see what might happen with his new powers, how is that cliche?
db323
db323Lv5

You read 0 chapters and are just spouting nonsense. There are no cliche's. What you are calling filler is a well written proper story. Something that is foreign on this site.

Vyte
VyteLv11

Bold of a person using like manipulation to get to the top of the reviews to say. You had 1 like just a couple of hours ago, yet with your spam review with 0 chapters read, people decided to like it up so fast? sure. Whoever did the like manipulation also liked up the ONE other negative review on this. I have no clue what your guys deal is, because if you actually read and disliked the story you would have posted an actual review

TheDolphin:Bold of a person inflating reviews by putting down 2 5 star reviews to say.
Oto
OtoLv14

Or maybe it’s because not all people are mindless Qidian followers who will eat up all of the same garbage they’re fed every week? However, you on the other hand, mind have a severe case.

Vyte:Bold of a person using like manipulation to get to the top of the reviews to say. You had 1 like just a couple of hours ago, yet with your spam review with 0 chapters read, people decided to like it up so fast? sure. Whoever did the like manipulation also liked up the ONE other negative review on this. I have no clue what your guys deal is, because if you actually read and disliked the story you would have posted an actual review
Pontuss
PontussLv14

What do you read then?

Oto:Or maybe it’s because not all people are mindless Qidian followers who will eat up all of the same garbage they’re fed every week? However, you on the other hand, mind have a severe case.
Doog
DoogLv10

Let's take an objective look at this story for a second, because that's what a rating is. For starters, is the translation high-quality? So far, I haven't seen any noticeable mistakes, and have in fact had fewer "huh?" moments in this novel than the large majority of other novels I've read. So check. Are the characters high-quality? So far, they've all acted reasonably realistically, making thoughts and decisions that most people in their situation would make. They do make mistakes (unlike some OP protags) and actually LEARN from them, which really just makes them actually likeable. Right away, with just those two points, in my eyes at least, this story has earned a three-star rating. You complained about the story having cliches? First off, no, it doesn't really. It's pretty original so far about how it handles most of it's concepts. Secondly, why is that a problem? People use "cliche" like a buzzword but honestly, cliche'd tropes are cliche for a reason, y'know? A story can have lots of cliches in it and still be great. Bothers me when these half-spam, thoughtless ratings get vote manipulated to the top to harm a story's chances of getting picked when barely anyone reading the story actually agrees. And you've explained literally none of your issues? You just stated them and hoped people would think you sounded authoritative enough for what you say to be taken as fact.

Copato_King
Copato_KingLv3

Did you even read the book?

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Vyte
VyteLv11

Here's an updated review copy and pasted from my forum post to persuade others to read this: Plot summary: Xiang Kun is a 30 year old programmer who recently lost his job because his company went bankrupt. After a long night of drinking, he blacks out and wakes up 2 days later in his apartment feeling... different. After visiting the hospital and determining he's fine, a weird series of events start to happen. First his all his teeth come out, and brand new ones start to grow back in their place, all his hair falls out, and all his skin peels off as though he's a snake going through shedding. He also determines that he is slightly stronger, and has better senses, and he no longer craves food. In fact, he vomits whenever he tries to eat. He's worried a lot at first, and thinks he's contracted a serious illness, but I'm all sure us readers know; he's become a vampire. Things I like about the novel: The MC is very intelligent. As soon as the changes start to happen to him, he starts logging every single change, whether its obvious things like how far he can see/hear, experimenting to see what foods he can stomach more, even though in the end they still make him vomit, to his weight, his mental stability, and his sleeping patterns. He even sets up cameras to record himself and save for his log of experimentation, like recording himself drinking blood, cutting himself to see if he regenerates, and sometimes recording himself sleeping to record his own sleeping habits. He goes through his whole change very scientifically, and I really enjoy it as this isn't something you see often in novels. All the characters, while not fully realistically fleshed out; they are a lot better developed than most other novels. There hasn't been one 'young arrogant master' or some d*uche trying to make trouble with him yet, although he has stopped a knife waving psycho. Who i would assume to be the female lead, while we haven't seen a lot of her yet, I feel like she's developed well and funny as well since she nicknames the MC 'saitama' due to the fact that MC is super strong and is bald. While I don't know if there will be more 'vampirical' humans besides the MC, there has been one other vampirical creature that the MC has killed and drank the blood of to grow stronger, so im interested as to where the plot will develop and how the mystery of how the MC became a vampire will get solved.

Astolfo_My_Waifu
Astolfo_My_WaifuLv11
Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

I wanted to believe those who gave 4-5 stars and said that the novel has no cliché, but they are lying... First of all, the romance is terribly forced. He clearly showed that he was not interested but the woman started to think "How come is he not interested in me? I had a lot of people asking me out but I never accepted anyone because I never found the right person, but why is he not interested in me? Is he gay?" (So fucking egoistic and self-centered already) Then she asked him for a date while hiking, which the MC clearly didnt want to go and had other things to do, but, he is the type that is not able to say "No" (cause he is an idiot) and so he agreed and said yes, because, in his words: "it was impossible to refuse". NO, it was easy, just say no! You are not interested in her, you dont have to agree to what she wants to do! Just say no politely and say you are not interested. This romance is the most forcefull cliché **** I have seen, and it is shoved in our faces just after barely 10 chapters. You can imagine how the story is gonna play it out. Then there is the fact of the cliché couple attacked by a man with a knife and the MC to rescue (an extremely rare occurance to even ever witness such a thing in the middle of the day with so many people around, but that casually happened outside his house right after becoming a vampire), and instead of stopping or tackling the man from behind he kick him and punch his face even when he already knows that his strength is absurd. He could have easily blocked him from behind but he had to punch and kick him to act cool tho, otherwise he wouldnt look cool enough, he has to look like a Hero because of plot of course. For everything, the romance and the way the plot moves forward COMPLETELY drag the whole novel down. Especially the annoying and cliché romance. And judging by how early and HOW MUCH of it was already showed, it is going to be a pretty major part of the novel that is going to be completely ****. If not even a major part of the way the plot is going to be driven forward. This time I learned to never trust a Chinese's novel if it contains any type of romance, they just can't seem do it right, with some rare exceptions. This is probably why House of Horrors, Lord of Mysteries, Reverend Insanity and others.. are so high quality and good, apart from all the good things they already have, they have zero romance to bring them down.

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