Very rough a lot of the problems can be easily solved though with a simple edit by someone even slightly proficient in english The main character is incredibly edgy but expresses it immaturerly and incredibly often, as if he has 8th Grade Syndrome. His trigger word is death if you say that, or it even flits across his unstable little mind be prepared for a full on ****storm. The largest flaws with the novel, in my opinion is the characters very exaggerated descriptions of himself and his the constant references to his past life, it doesn't really move on from that so your often pulled back to something that does not help build character depth
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Yea that was really annoying and pointless. He talks about his past life too much which is ridiculous considering he has pretty much done a complete 180 in this new world. He basically decided to be a "good noodle" just because his "parents" told him to play nice and respect women and others lives. It pretty much ruins what could of been a decent concept where the mc stays evil but learns to grow from his past and evolve into something better such as a person who has a dark side but also has simple logic.
