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Lunar_Eclipse5
Lunar_Eclipse5Lv134yr
2020-06-27 14:45

I like the idea behind the story, but the writing quality is just too bad for me to enjoy it. The way it's written also seems kinda forced which ruins the plot quit a bit. I think if the author got someone to help edit the story it could be way better than it is right now.

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