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Sulov_Adhikari
Sulov_AdhikariLv144yr
2020-05-06 02:25

I find everything in this novel great except the writing quality. The story and character development is phenomenal with little information of character background now and then. I find this story really intriguing and engaging. Eventhough i am not a grammar nazi, I have to say that there are many grammatical error which makes the senetence hard to read and understand. It will be better if such things are improved as i have high expectations from this novel.

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Before you expect something from others please do it yourself first.

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