Overall a fun time. A strong premise, coupled with great dramatic potential. Definitely a good time to be had here. The inherent ******* baked into the plot of this story is quite strong, and carries quite a lot. I would ask the author to include a little more description of the places during a situation. I actually have a lot of trouble with this myself as an author, so I can't give the best advice. The only thing I would say is to read more novels; that helps a lot with knowing how things should be described. Aside from that I have no real complaints. I love that the author planned out this story, at least a little. The little narrative tricks they use are also quite appreciated. I also love the characters, especially Vincent and his little protege. Yes, their dynamic is a little cliched, but they're a cliche I personally enjoy very much. This story is just fun. Keep writing! I can't wait to see how much you improve!
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