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Sigmao
SigmaoLv114yr
2020-05-11 08:51

This is a very well written novel that has certainly gathered my attention. The characters are well fleshed-out as well. I'll definitely be following this novel going forwards.

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Breno_Ranyere
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This is an isekai story about a group of characters on different corners of the map working to obtain the top spot on their respective areas to achieve their dream of bringing anarchy to the world. It's a very interesting concept and the lore of the world is clearly well thought out. I liked hearing about how this work works and how we reached the point we were at. My main issue with the novel is that, it's kinda hard to follow. My biggest personal problem is that I feel there is too much focus on the story and not very much on the characters. What I mean by that is that, we keep rotating from different points of view to see what each main player is doing, but they all kinda talk the same and act the same because they all share the same goal of reaching for anarchy. At times, it feels like youre reading the same person three times. Because they are so similar, and because we rotate so much (and maybe because I have the attention spam of a goat), sometimes I forget which character I'm even following and what the current goal even is. Aside from that, I don't feel these characters have a lot of chemistry. Every interaction feels like coworkers coldly planning their next job project. Everybody is trying so hard to show off how much they know more about what they're doing than the person next to them. The best story to follow was Vincent's because he had a simpler setup. He's trying to raise a protegee. That's easy to follow. Everyone else feels like they are embarking to create world war III behind the scenes or something. I do feel like this is a novel with potential since I really like the idea of trying to show the world from different points of view, but I feel like it needed a bit more polishing on the character department. Maybe if we didn't jump from point to point so often and hadn't so much backstory to absorb, It could have been an easier read, for me at least.

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