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Colin_Holman
Colin_HolmanLv124yr
2020-11-23 03:38

you can almost see the writer getting better and better the only problem I have with it is that he seems to want to change the characters abilities from when he first started

A Path of Bone and Poison

Morbidwishes
4.0
145 Chs

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Jean_Fere
Jean_FereLv4

TLDR: It's pretty MEH. It starts out well with a fun idea, but that gets lost and rather quickly and the problems dominate. First, the writing is at best bland. Almost everything, is the protagonist's inner monologue, and it's very passive. I don't even know how to properly describe it. Second the plot, it's really driven from on high. I have no trouble with fate/destiny/the gods/higher powers screwing with a character but there has to be rhyme or reason to it and there has to be a limit to how often it happens. The main character is now on his 4th reroll, the love interest her third and the only reason is the higher powers intervened once again, That's just big stuff, for small things they show up around every ten chapters Third the characters. I started out liking the mc, but he (girl body definitely still a guy) just got so undefined it was painful. The rest well so far there really aren't any. Closest you get is the FL, and she is not very interesting at this point Finally the world is incoherent. There's just too much lazy writing and 'oops wrote myself into a corner I'll just do an a$$pull to fix it'. Where it stands now it reads like video game grinding novel, where the MC is grinding away like a gold farmer but isn't allowed to progress or gain anything.

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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Gods interfere way too much, basically anything MC does don't/won't matter if the gods decide that it won't. MC and her GFs souls are overtaken by gods and they become some ticking bombs or some **** (not important as you really will drop it at that point anyway). So mc really has nothing she can do, gods are playing her and her GF like a fidle, making them their champions/slaves/soul raped slaves. Gods integrate with mcs GF basically changing her. MCs mother magically knows that MC is a lesbian after talking to her for a couple of lines (and no there wasnt any MC staring at boobs and salivating at them or flirting with girls in front of her mother), she just KNEW. and 2nd biggest bull**** that will make you quit if you already didn't after Gods basically have the final say on anything and they say a lot, is how they have to reveal all their stats and secret skills etc. First to the MCs mother and her soon to be GF, with this i somehow got past it as they were "friendlies" "family to be", but when they have to enter a dungeon A DUNGEON... WHEN THEY HAVE TO ENTER A DUNGEON... WHEN they HAVE to ENTER a DUNGEON.... THEY.. they have to FUCKING show all their skills/level/secret skills/stats TO THE FUCKING GATEKEEPER SO THAT HE LETS THEM IN. WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF

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Benjamin_
Benjamin_Lv10

It's a pretty poor novel. There isn't really any semblance of a story. The whole novel reeks of constant dungeon grinding for little to no reason and being ****ed over by higher beings cos they....apparently don't have anything better to do with their time?

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Ilovenovel
IlovenovelLv14

It starts good but it gets stupid after chapter 7. Come on. Where is the suspence or some other ****. Too fast I mean she was a poison master and after a chapter she became a necromancer, that will be killed by a God, who have control of her girlfriend which she began to love after 1 day. Sucks.

4yr
Jasperthedoge
JasperthedogeLv14

Great story can’t wait to read more, keep it up πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Reveal spoiler

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Daoist690532
Daoist690532Lv11

It's a great story honestly, but a rather rushed one ..................................................................................

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darkplease
darkpleaseLv4

Δ° dont like that just look Alex stat points and MC wtf :) and authors fantasies are very childish i read 25 eppisode and i think waste of time

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ComfyPiggy
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This is really good. Can't wait for more chapters.

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good............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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