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2020-09-04 19:20

I wanted to like it...but that's really hard. It's hard to care about events when the MC doesn't. spontaneously evolve from a goblin to a dark elf, no problem. don't even question the blessing from a goddess you never interacted with that made it possible until she manipulates you so she can immediately wipe your memory. a girl you're interested in suddenly gets possessed by a goddess that said her retaining any of her personality at all was only luck? time to go to the next level. all of that while abilities are ignored entirely, serial killer despite being overpowered, treated as if they have no effect, insatiable being a trait compatible with monogamy but when said partner becomes an invalid target it's compatible with celibacy, or changed every ten chapters, all of her divine blessings. a God's mark can be claimed by another with no issue whatsoever, but a necromancer's mark is untouchable. zero recourse whatsoever. the world was cool until dungeons became a thing. they're ranked, but capable of hosting creatures much more powerful than that rank if said creature feels like it should let them. they're distinct, unless they decide to link to mommy dungeon that is accessible from all dungeons and let's people in at random. they're false reflections of real creatures, except for sometimes they send you to a place sealed by a god or a hidden cave of a monster that knows a god personally, those times you're teleported to another location. they pick the difficulty based on your power, except when they don't feel like it. the worst part, though, is the lack of permanence. going to be a poison wizard? can't do any other magic? nevermind, you can do shadow magic too. and non-attribute magic. and cleaning magic. you get a skill to use a sword, guess it's time to go back to pistols. objects bought from the system store are better because they're standardized, never mind it's an auction system.

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Gods interfere way too much, basically anything MC does don't/won't matter if the gods decide that it won't. MC and her GFs souls are overtaken by gods and they become some ticking bombs or some **** (not important as you really will drop it at that point anyway). So mc really has nothing she can do, gods are playing her and her GF like a fidle, making them their champions/slaves/soul raped slaves. Gods integrate with mcs GF basically changing her. MCs mother magically knows that MC is a lesbian after talking to her for a couple of lines (and no there wasnt any MC staring at boobs and salivating at them or flirting with girls in front of her mother), she just KNEW. and 2nd biggest bull**** that will make you quit if you already didn't after Gods basically have the final say on anything and they say a lot, is how they have to reveal all their stats and secret skills etc. First to the MCs mother and her soon to be GF, with this i somehow got past it as they were "friendlies" "family to be", but when they have to enter a dungeon A DUNGEON... WHEN THEY HAVE TO ENTER A DUNGEON... WHEN they HAVE to ENTER a DUNGEON.... THEY.. they have to FUCKING show all their skills/level/secret skills/stats TO THE FUCKING GATEKEEPER SO THAT HE LETS THEM IN. WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF

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