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2020-06-25 01:05

Story started good with the slight problem of low side characters but recently (100+) i have the feeling like the author is on a LSD trip and wants to run in several directions at once. Killing the sidekick? Reviving her? Who is she now? Some Crossbreed persona between the goddess and herself? Or is the goddess controlling her with console controller while siting on a sofa? Who is the MC now? Still darkelf or some dragonkin? Where did the skeletal dragon come from? Now the party has their levels, classes and memories reset to zero? Are the first 100 chapters optional and can now be skipped?

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Gods interfere way too much, basically anything MC does don't/won't matter if the gods decide that it won't. MC and her GFs souls are overtaken by gods and they become some ticking bombs or some **** (not important as you really will drop it at that point anyway). So mc really has nothing she can do, gods are playing her and her GF like a fidle, making them their champions/slaves/soul raped slaves. Gods integrate with mcs GF basically changing her. MCs mother magically knows that MC is a lesbian after talking to her for a couple of lines (and no there wasnt any MC staring at boobs and salivating at them or flirting with girls in front of her mother), she just KNEW. and 2nd biggest bull**** that will make you quit if you already didn't after Gods basically have the final say on anything and they say a lot, is how they have to reveal all their stats and secret skills etc. First to the MCs mother and her soon to be GF, with this i somehow got past it as they were "friendlies" "family to be", but when they have to enter a dungeon A DUNGEON... WHEN THEY HAVE TO ENTER A DUNGEON... WHEN they HAVE to ENTER a DUNGEON.... THEY.. they have to FUCKING show all their skills/level/secret skills/stats TO THE FUCKING GATEKEEPER SO THAT HE LETS THEM IN. WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF

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