The story is interesting. A good plot here. I read 5 chapters out of the 9 published so far. The Story is developing well. The character design is good and so is the world background. As far as writing goes, your novel is going well. There are some mistakes like not using the capital letter while starting a sentence or the name of people and places. However, these mistakes do not interfere with the reading of the story. I would suggest running your text through an online grammar and plagiarism checker. It is not 100% perfect but it points out a lot of mistakes and ensures you do not use the same words others use. Please do the same with the Synopsis. All the best, author!
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