Review Detail of WriterWen in The Paladin Order Reformed

Although there are only two chapters for now, I believe that this story has a great potential. The author has interesting ideas that piqued my interest. Keep your creativity running wild, dear author! Good luck! Don't stop writing! 😊 About the technicalities, I don't really have much to say about your style of writing. Just please do proofread your work so readers would not get confused. Also, one more thing... You can search up other ways to do the dialogue part to add a variety to it.