Item: Reincarnated As a Fox With System
Rating: 3
Author: KeCha

KeChaLv44yr

2020-09-29 13:42

From someone who read it. WRiting Quality: Decent. not the best but its good enough that you can understand the point being conveyed. 3/5 Story Development: its alright. I like how she wenT to the foxes home but I didn’t really like the first arc where she Followed the ml home. it was borinG and very Very long. I like how The mc was reborn a fox, Very very unique and also the reason i started readinG. 4/5 Character DesIgn: I really really Do not like Tang Li Xue for Various reasons. in the beGining, she is just a girl in a hosPital bed for her whole life then she dies and she suddenly has a uncontrollable ego and very is Very hAughty. She continUes to be haughty even thOugh she is just a weakLing. she reminds me of a kid who doesn’t know how high the sky is. really annoying especially when shes in her 20s. Another part, she is overly reliant on her peTs. Honestly, She has to be by far the worst mc ive read on wn and ive read A LOT. 1/5 World Background: Its pretty Average. but i Like cultivation based novels so ill give it 4/5 might be 3.5/5 If the author doesn’t conTinue to grow it. now there is not much To say about it as The author barely revealed anything. 4/5 Total: a pretty solid 3/5 I apologize for The capitalization where it’s not Meant to be. Typing on The phone is hard.

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

godadi

4.8

974 Chs

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Replies11

gg_gg_7901Lv1

i totally agree and i want more people to see this comment in the sea of bot comments giving 5 stars

4yr

KeChaLv4

I’m honestly surprised that someone actually agrees with me. Reading through the comments really made me believe that I was the only one who thought this way. ... And I’m questioning humanity seeing how loved this novel has become. Really, no hate. I just don’t see how anyone can love the mc’s character. Just how is a brat lovable?

gg_gg_7901:i totally agree and i want more people to see this comment in the sea of bot comments giving 5 stars

4yr

Jyfguy6rft6tftuLv4

What chapter are you on?

3yr

Beast41582Lv3

I agree. I am currently reading 6 female MC system novels, and every single one of them has this as the MC's personality. It is the most annoying and feels as if everyone is trying to copy so I'm a spider. I loved that book but even Shiro's personality got bothersome in some parts. It is a very hard and complicated personality to pull off while still keeping the MC relatable and shouldn't be tried by everyone.

3yr

Beast41582Lv3

probably too late, and I know you didn't ask this to me, but I eventually gave up at 390ish. MC's intelligence never improves and she still acts naive, impulsive, and cocky/arrogant. I think it would have been better as a parody or even if they just got rid of, or changed her background. I honestly don't know why so many people are using reincarnation when the back story of the previous life doesn't affect the story or the MC personality at all.

Jyfguy6rft6tftu:What chapter are you on?

3yr

TheDeadScientistLv15

well everyone has to start somewhere and you cant just start with a good MC she has to turn into that MC and its called Character growth. also she was still a child im pretty sure... not 20 from what the reveiw said that was just a lie because the foxs would not believe her. But i read the first chapter again to see if the age was seen but maybe she was 12-13ish? Idk but she was yung enough to be called a child...

KeCha:I’m honestly surprised that someone actually agrees with me. Reading through the comments really made me believe that I was the only one who thought this way. ... And I’m questioning humanity seeing how loved this novel has become. Really, no hate. I just don’t see how anyone can love the mc’s character. Just how is a brat lovable?

3yr

MrEarthCreeperLv15

I agree with op about the mc being annoyingly dumb. She has a "completed book 📖 about the world she is in" and for 400± chapters she didn't read though it and only looking up somethings in it. It is almost like the author is purposely not using it even though it would have gave her a better idea of the cultivation world and it's danger from the start. Also the book 📖 has information about the immortal plane. This book alone could make a normal person into a immortal with time and luck and can still be used in the early parts of the immortal world. What a perfectly wasted item for our brain dead mc 🙄.

3yr

Tanja_16Lv13

Omg, I tought it was only me with that kind of opinion and I finally see a negative review 🤡 About Tang Li Xue being dumb as shoe, does anyone remember the scene in the village (it was on her mission with two bratty foxes from the academy - a silver badge exam i think?) when our MC was in a room and she heard a knock to the door. Behind the door was obviously a bad chick dressed as a roommaid or something that Tang Li Xue SEEN already and people in the comments went crazy about stupidity of this situation because for a couple of chapters thay talked threw the fk door, I think bad girl exposed herself once or two times with slip of the tounge and regardless of multiple skills and abilities MC has to check her identity, she still was like: Tang Li Xue: 👁👄👁 oke, Imma open up nice gurl

3yr

FROST_1269Lv2

I think the reason why authors use reincarnation is because it makes the worldbuilding easier (at least in my opinion) since both you and the mc have no knowledge of the world. It simply makes it easier to write because both the mc and the reader gradually learn about the world they are in. About her personality you are completly right she is kinda dumb. But she also is a child and never had any kind of education since she was in a hospital her whole live. She also never had parents that could have raised her. About the arogant bit it can be justified with her having a pet that can destroy the world and a system with which she was able to evolve two times within 4 months. Since it was said that it usualy takes thousands of years to evolve ones. About the world building is not enough known to really say if it is good or not so I can't really say anything about it. I would give it a 4/5 since I can justify most of these things and I enjojed it but I agree that it isn't 5/5 If there are any mistakes blame my phone.

Beast41582:probably too late, and I know you didn't ask this to me, but I eventually gave up at 390ish. MC's intelligence never improves and she still acts naive, impulsive, and cocky/arrogant. I think it would have been better as a parody or even if they just got rid of, or changed her background. I honestly don't know why so many people are using reincarnation when the back story of the previous life doesn't affect the story or the MC personality at all.

3yr

Nour_Ahmed_9433Lv3

A character doesn't have to be smart or likeable for you to like the story. She has a vivid personality and is full of life after passing through such a boring life in a hospital, I am not surprised that she had another side that exploded after reimcarnating. Even if i do agree that she was stupid and could have acted better in many situations. Her greedy personality gave her character more life. Afterall who doesn't want to become better and if you were to be a confined hospital patient then reincarnate and get a system that tells you it can make you the strongest th en you too would be greedy for the endless possibilities.She is not haughty or egoistic, she is just slightly arrogant and narcissistic which again gives her character more life. Then again to all their personal opinions. If you didn't like the story then It would have been better to leave without reviewing which is much easier too.

10mth

DaoisthrcwdRLv15

personally I would give it a five-star. but I see where you're coming from. I didn't really start getting into the story till after around chapter 200.

5mth

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